Recursive: re·cur·sive adjective \ri-ˈkər-siv\
Definition of recursive: Of, relating to, or constituting a procedure that can repeat itself indefinitely; Infinite.
Gizmo Gadget goes a little loco in the coco at a get together one day, and becomes a shut in. When his friends go check on him, they find out that he's been hanging out with a pony they've never seen before. One of them has doubts, however, and voices it openly. Who is this unknown pony? Where did he come from? It will all be revealed, because true friendship is recursive, no matter what the circumstance.
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Time fcuk ? Wat xd
I'm so confused
I've played partway into time fcuk, but I don't understand this at all. As well, I failed to visualize the first scene.
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It's ok to be confused! Time Fcuk is only a small part of the story. Really, the only major thing I drew from it was Steven, of course. As for not being able to visualize the first scene, please elaborate. I can't improve if I don't know where to start! ;) thank you for the critique you gave though. It's my first story, (based off of a true one I might add...), and as such it will not be my best one. I thank you for taking the time to read it and comment. :)
IKR?
Well, I couldn't really see what was happening in mah brain. i.e. where was the noise coming from? Was now-Gizmo moving his mouth? Was there a box? I also think that partially it was my unfamiliarity with the characters. I couldn't really think of how they looked in the first place, but it's probably my fault for skimming. Secondly, what was the motive at the end of the story? Why did Gizmo get rid of Steven, how long had Steven been with Gizmo, why did Gizmo want to get rid of him?
I hope that helps.
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Thank you for the feedback! To answer your questions in the order they were asked: the sentences about computer stuff were to show how his stress was making him crazy. The idea of Steven was created here, but it was Gizmo talking in his own voice as Steven, and not realizing what was going on. The box was simply a reference to the game Steven is from. The motive in getting rid of him is that he was worried that Steven was taking over his life, his original purpose, relieving his stress, had not only been fulfilled, but he was actually causing Gizmo to backslide. Also, he felt bad for Steven, since he knew that Steven's memory was fragmented. It does say in the story how long it was since that first outburst, until the day of the get together for Gizmo... But if I remember correctly, about a month and a half to two months. I hope I cleared some things up for you. :). Just remember, this is based around true events, just ponified is all. ;)