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InsignificantGryffindor


I fucking love ponies.

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"And so on he would travel, forever lost in the intricate web of space, forever saving the worlds of many, forever trying to find that one who would say, 'Thank you.'"

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 23 )

This is great! Can't wait for more!

Thank you! I can assure you that there will be more!

I shall read this once i get back from school :twilightsmile:

Dame that s intense

pretty good, pretty good. i can't wait to see where this goes. and i can't wait to see how you make the doctor act.

This story has made my day-no....It's made my LIFE.

....I like where this is going. Keep up the good work! :ajsmug:

You now have my undivided attention. This will be good...

interesting, interesting, aw fuck it. this is awesome and i really can't wait for more to come out for this. keep it up.

2195607 Thanks! I will probably not be updating for a while, because I have limited access to the computer. I really appreciate your feedback.

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oh don't worry about how long it takes, just as long as you do post something. that's all that matters to me.

2163687 Wow! That's a real honor :). Thanks!

Discord you are doing it all wrong. He has a the Tardis, so he could simply come back right after he left. Now, if you were planing on messing with time and space while the Doctor is gone to prevent him from coming back right away. You still forget he could go back to before his past self got there and lay low until his past self leaves.

However, those are just nit-picks which can be looked over or filled in. This chapter look good with the way you do play on the Doctors past. I do find it hard that Discord would need anything to get the Doctor. I understand not using his powers to teleport the others due to Twilight. But it feels like Dinky was just take to simply get Ditzy to play apart. Now if Dinky was sent off with one of the Elements then it would make a bit more sense. Oh well, keep up the good work.

~Hearn

All I can say is Yes. Moar!

Yes I am still interested!

Thanks to all who responded! I am currently working on it now. It will take some time, for it's a long chapter, but it will be posted.

2934340 Chapter four is currently under development. As I said, it's going to take a long time to write, especially if I'm focused on other projects as well. The beginning was long and monotonous, but I have completed it. The rest of the chapter shouldn't take that long, but like I said, I'm focused on my other stories as well.

Dang, this is too good to stop reading.

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