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Twilight, Twilight, Twilight. You just don't get it do you you are Necrosis you have the power and you will pay the ultimate price say hello to death for me he's an old friend.
Stalkerloo rides again.
Careful there Twilight. You are becoming the very thing you set out to destroy - the false god.
Ahahaha Necromancer style !
Like I said earlier , I am a bit suprised at how Celestia is acting. One would think that a thousand years old being would be more wise regarding Twillight and what not to do. Imprisoning Spike , seriously
Even if this story follow Twillight's point of view , it would be nice to have Celestia's or Applejack's at some point I think , to give some insight on what is happening and on how they consider Twillight now.
As a matter of fact , Celestia was rather silent in this chapter. Conflicted feelings maybe ? :
2460360 Death/Me: Wondered where you went. You're supposed to be dead!
2460380 Hey, fight fire with fire, right?
2460408 Maybe.
2460476 Me dead HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
2460476 Also a very famous quote but one that I personally enjoy. Be careful when you fight monsters lest you become one yourself learn from this twilight do not let your ambitions blind you and lead to a tragedy that you may cause like the death of your brother.
2460491 But where's the fun in that?
2460578 And that crazy little comment is why you are still my friend
I really like where this story has been going the last few chapters. You're making this very enjoyable to root for evil Twilight. I'm going to guess things end up bad for both sides at the end though. Keep up the great work.
2460615 And among your favourite authors, if I remember correctly.
Ha Celestia how many pony's religious like worship have you lost today? how much farther will you go before deciding weather to deal with things personnaly or deciding to let Twilight go, trying to regain her friendship or at least acceptance?
hood chap undead ftw, also bout time blueblood died. That is what I wish I could do to all loud mouth idiots similar to him W/O repercussions
oh god the sheer awesomeness of this story burns my eyes, yet i can't look away....
This site just got more awesome simply for containing this story. Great Chapter as usual. Keep um comin at this rate and It will awesome
He looked as if I was wearing a pink suit making strange noises at him.
Now where have I seen that one before? I wonder...
when I saw the .gif of twilight dancing,I got up and danced
interesting
the timer is counting down soon the dead shall rise and gods shall fall.
but who is good and who is evil not even the fates can see through this fog of war that has consumed this realm.
what sweet sorrow it is when one you gave your trust and love too turns out to be the one that will be your demise.
who is ally and who is foe.
love ones will die and enemys will rise wether they be the same person only he will know.
for he is the one who pulls the strings of all you see.
playing with hearts as toys and people like there part of a game of chess.
yet there is no opponent that hes playing against because he controls both sides.
while all the pieces are blind unable to tell for sure whos ally or foe.
is anyone an ally?
is anyone a foe?
in the end all that will remain is what he wants to remain for he is the puppet master, he is the directer, he is the god, the demon, he is all.
and i.....i am the reader i watch as these events unfold doing nothing to stop it for i have no power to stop it. do i even want to stop it?
am i just another puppet being controled and dont even know it?
i may never know......
Three chapters in so short a time....
You have made this humble brony's entire week
I just don't understand Twilight. She gets into necromancy as part of some utterly stupid "revenge" scheme over Celestia "lying" to her about being a goddess, despite the fact Celestia never stated, implied, or even encouraged her own "worship". Then, when she realizes just how idiotic that scheme is, she decides to continue to oppose Celestia on the grounds that Celestia doesn't accept her necromancy. So...why don't you just stop using it, then? The only reason you got into it in the first place was to get revenge and since you're not doing that anymore, why do you still use it? It's like "I'm evil, because Celestia refuses to accept my evilness."
Now, you're planning on killing her, the person who controls the sun, without even planning ahead as to the planetary repercussions. Why don't the villains in MLP fanfics ever remember the whole "controls the sun" thing? I'd especially think Twilight would understand it.
I can only hope the little hints with Luna are right: the necromancy has "corrupted" Twilight and she's steadily inching toward insane omnicidal maniac who ignores all reason and logic. Given there's been little indication Twilight will be "redeemed" or stopped, the [Grimdark] train is now boarding. Next stop: Planetary omnicide.
2462101 That's the comparison. I knew I forgot something; the link!
2462216 Believe it or not, I did a Drama performance a few years back where I played someone called the puppet master. I might blog the video if I find it.
2462114 why waste precious magic on reanimating the dead when you can appeal to your enemy's greatest opposition. It's no secret that the relationship between ponies and Gryphons is about as solid as that of the Americans and... well everywhere else (lol, jks). And as for feeding them? They're carnivores, they're going to war against meat. Do the math.
Also:
LOL!!!
A thought occurs while re-reading this chapter.
Twilight could now reanimate Rarity with little consequence. My understanding was that she was hesitant to do so at first because it would tip her hoof to early and reveal that there was a necromancer present in Equestria before she was ready. Rarity's death was witnessed and if she was seen again would be a clear sign.
Now that Twilight is out in the open, her primary reason for not reanimating Rarity with free will is diminished. And if she plans to openly fight against Celestia, then she is likely to need as many of the Elements on her side as she can get.
2465525 the reason she didn't reanimate her in the first place is because doing so would be torture for Rarity. On a side note the Elements won't work because they need to be of one mind, and with the ranks divided as they are, not to mention the elements only work for the greater good, things don't look promising.
2465089 awsome.
Interesting idea.
just read all the chapters so far....fucking love it. keep up the good work and I cant wait for the next chapter.
Read all chapters cant wait for next chapter
ahahaha, well that was random
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Nuff said.
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2505444 HAHA!! OWNED!
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I really like this story. The only thing I am missing is the resurrection of Rarity or Midnight's various victims for that matter. With great power comes the responsibility to also actually use it when needed, no matter the repercussions. PR wise Twilight has nothing to lose, and by reviving them she may be able to endear some more ponies to her (for example the revived).
As for not becoming a false god and being outnumbered, the cult kills both birds with one stone if she teaches them necromancy, making them realize that also Twi only cooks with water (and a special talent for magic, admittedly).
Read all of it in one go, I love it so far....Ill be awating more awesome evil Twilight
Read it in one go... and I'm really enjoying it! Well, except for the sex scenes that is, never been into that kinda stuff... but apart from that, its an awesome fic! I've read many "dark" or "evil" twilight fics, and its nice for a change that she is no. Awaiting for the next one!
Liked and Favved and if you keep on like this, will be followed :D
This story is absolutely amazing, Twilight is such a total baws.
Twilight called Trixie a dingbat and I gave up. Interesting concept, though. Could use a couple more chapters before the beginning, I think. The introduction to Twilight's characterization is very abrupt and lacks the build it needs to have her casually call anypony a dingbat. Beyond that, typos. I do believe I saw somewhere in here 'is topped' instead of 'I stopped'
EDIT: Or I just hadn't read far enough in Just finished chapter one out of curiosity, and this looks quite a bit more interesting now. I'll give it another shot when I get a chance.
2635819 Hope you grow to like it.
Yush! That's the second best blueblood killing I've read so far haha. I'm absolutely loving this story so far, first time I've read one where Twilight isn't being possessed or something to turn evil.
This was funny, and i started to wondered where spike was well ny question was answered
This was funny, and i started to wondered where spike was well ny question was answered
Turning Blueblood into a zombie is cool and all, but if you REALLY wanted to mess with the princesses, just resurrect him as fully free willed as Trixie or Dash. Let them mull over the ethics of whether they should, on principle, re-kill and rebury their nephew when he's not a mindless monster, but an actual, intelligent (well sort of) pony who can beg them not to. Sit back and let all the assembled ponies argue if this necromancy thing is really so bad. Heck, start popping around to various cities and start patching up and reviving various ponies' dead relatives and watch as the PR turns in your favor. If you have to be all dark and villainous, I suppose you can still cackle evilly while doing so.
404 img not found? Uhg that image could've made the difference between life and death!
5628225 Fixed it.
Whoa... Necro army? Awesome XD
hahahah, nice job man!
This will be interesting.
Harrah blueballs is dead