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Give into darkness twilight, GIVE IN TO TRUE POWER! Another great story my friend.
Sounds good, can't wait for chapter 2.
I like the name, I've been bitten by a brown recluse before, so I have some history with necrosis. I like the basic premis, though Twilight seems way off character. If you had a little bit more depth into the transformation, it would be more believable, but I suspect you'll get into that in later chapters.
I also noticed a few grammar errors.
Trixie seemed to brighten at your statement and hold as you mentioned what killed her in the first place.
You suddenly jumped from first person to second.
Interesting note; I resurrected a moth exactly on month and three days ago.
Should be one not on.
Interesting story though, I look forward to reading more
This is gonna be badass
Twilight the Necromancer... Sounds good to me.
2030060 that first one will be because i've been reading a few second person stories, lol. also just fixed those mistakes.
This is a good story and you should feel good. Keep it up!
I really like it and my favorite class in Diablo two is the necromancer. Let's just hope to christ she doesn't try to destroy all of equestria in the process keep up the good work
I look forward to more, very nice introduction
Another dark Twilight story? I'm in
sounds good but i feel a bit scared when theres sex involved in a necromantic story lol
You already wrote it? Awesome!
love it so far. cna't wait for moar. can I have moar? if that's okay with you, that is...
Im hoping for some slice of life zombie Trixie. What has happened to me?
It's like a creepypasta story. That's a job well done
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necromancy one of my fav studys funny thing is my other fav is restoration magic or healing magic whatever you wish to call it.
Interesting idea, this could really go somewhere, consider yourself Marked for a read.
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So..., you did it, good job.
Oh shit shes past the point of no return. Hopefull dark twi will finally win and rule equestria instead of getting caught and losing awesome start so far and hope you update sooon
I don't usually say: MOAR...but when I do....I really fucking like a story. Cheers mate and hope to see moar soon
Necromancer stories are instant favs for me... And when I read this soon we shall see if it remains there...
Dang this is good... Definetly staying in my favs.
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OHMYGOSH YES TAKE ALL MY YES'S!!!!
2036186 nearly wet myself watching that.
Started reading.
I don't usually point errors or anything but this one is bugging me.
"Grimoire de Crépuscule" It's "du", not "de".
Dis gon be gud I say, dis gon be gud. I noticed a small mistake though Grimoire de Crépuscule should be Grimoire du Crépuscule. Oh and fun fact, Sion is the capital of Valais a canton (state) of Switzerland, but I highly doubt that was on purpose.
Twilight the Necromancer?
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Amulet of Sion?
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It's Fancy, not Prench.
I wonder if Twilight will get a Villain Song. Villain Songs are the best!
The Sombra eyes was more than a little unnecessary, at least you didn't add the green smoke.
Necromancers are dicks you guys...necromancers are dicks...
2922317 Only the majority, or the minority, judging by how you look at it.
They're often portrayed as bad people since what they're doing is considered taboo, but honestly it's no worse than watering a plant.
You water a plant, and it grows.
You focus life force, and it multiplies.
Listening to dismiss from KHBBS very fitting
So she's somehow written over 700000 entries in four months?
4278194 I think you might want to reread the second paragraph "It’s been three years since I began researching this field of magic"
Darkness, thy shadows and creepiness comfort me.
Nice job man! This looks great!
3748755 At least someone understands. Necromancy is simply controlling, or resurrecting, the dead. Clerics do it.
Was 'Tsundere Trixie' really a necessity?
Nevermind. I've seen it plenty of times. Carry on.
Ya hear that guys?
Those black and red OCs need to stop.
*Slow claps*
Wow, Sparkle. I had no idea you were such a great liar.
Wait what!? She... oh... oh my god.
Quite I good start! I do notice some slight grammatical errors though, but they're small things most people won't pick up on unless they're pretty well versed in English grammar.
For example, this line. You shouldn't end the dialogue with a period, rather you should end it with a comma. Why? Because Twilight is still speaking. When dialogue is followed by a tag (for example, he/she/I said, asked, replied), then you should use a comma before the closing quote when you would normally use a period. If no tag follows the text, just end the dialogue with punctuation to end the spoken sentence. So rather, the line should be written like this:
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She's quite studious, after all