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Twi now would be a good time for you to back up a few steps and get help.
I still donĀ“t see the point of no resurrecting Rarity. As Twilight has said, they cannot operate the Elements any longer, so they are safe from the magic rainbow.
3353145 or you know use one of you're escape teleportation runes.
Luna has a keyblade? Damn...
I'm surprised that Rarity didn't get brought back after the Cult took off. Seems like an easy job and it'd bring Fluttershy and Sweetie Belle back to sanity.
Hum... I don't know if I should stop reading this now or not. I find myself wishing for the protagonist to be caught (and punished/killed) and I am not going to fully appreciate the story with that mindset.
As Trotsky once said :
"The end may justify the means as long as there is something that justifies the end
I can't see anything here that justifies the end anymore.
She is basically trying to take revenge on Celestia for something that she caused herself.
I liked her at the beginning of this story because while her methode were questionnable , she was still doing this for a valid (somewhat) reason.
Now she seem to be evil for the sake of being evil , and is proving Celestia right in the process.
That , or you are a genius for telling us the story from Twilight point of view while she is heavily deluding herseft. As someone said " The worse evil is the one believing to be good"
3353391 Exactly. So therefore RUN BITCH RUN!!!
AND THEN SHIT HITS THE FAN
Yay, its not dead. Seriously though, I was surprised when I saw this updated.
And now, the possibilities of what will happen when (And if) this updates again. First would be she runs away, second would she fights Luna, either winning (With or without using he full power) or losing, at which point she would either escape, the story end, or others (Trixie) carry on her work, with much more vengeance. In my opinion it would fit well with the theme if she were to defeat Luna, possibly without even using her full power, proving that as an alicorn she isn't almighty. Twilight could also try to talk her down or even try to convince her to join them, as it was said that she had a fight with Celestia, and was becoming a victim of her paranoia. This is possible, at least as a first action, as she did express previously that she held no quarrel with Luna, those considering her previous alignment and relation to Celestia, as well as her emotions about necromancy, though those emotions could also be used against her, letting her convince Luna that necromancy isn't truly evil, and that she still has great loyalty to he friends and family (Which would also likely include Luna). The only other possibility would be that she lets Twilight go, possibly for the good natured act of freeing those wrongly imprisoned, or perhaps as a response to past relations or friendships, or maybe even for simply talking her down. Perhaps even defeating Luna and letting her live, if not out of kindness than to prove that she isn't too far gone to care. Something unexpected could also happen, such as Twilight having incorporated a teleportation sigil into her cloak or something.
Sorry for my huge monologue, i tend to go off for a while once I get started
Also, to work out a bit of confusion, does this differentiate from the show before or after discord is reformed, and if after, where's he been all this time.
3354282 Some interesting points. I'll keep them i mind. As for Discord, he's still a statue.
3353145 "Back up"?
Dude, I'd be running like a bitch if that happened to me.
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So Luna has geass?
3355758 That would be something, but no.
That image looks exceedingly familiar, and I don't see a source. You get permission to steal that?
(Not that I don't love the story, I just dislike it when someone steals cover art.)
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3356233 don't look at me, i got the image from another sourceless story.
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I remember seeing that same picture on the cover of a fic that's called The Immortal Game or something to that effect
3367769 so it is.
why wont you revive rarity? you practically have all the dark ones in your story why not add rarity?
*actually looked at the image of Luna's blade for the first time*
DEAR GOD.
It's one of the few keyblades that actually has a BLADE! All those keyblades have higher stat bonuses!
Twilight is boned.
First thing... LELOUCH IMAGE!
Hmm I actually would love the story to be set in more grayish-gray morality but whatever, as it stands it's great.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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I agree we need more Rarity. I'm glad you updated this story; I read it during your break and considered it dead, so it was nice surprise when this popped on top of favorites one day. So far great story, she is going evil from her own reasons no degrading possession like in most stories. Originally I found sex/clop scenes kind of annoying but it somehow fits the story. It is interesting to see how her original reason (prove Celly is not omnipotent) starts making less and less sense and her actions turn mostly to revenge, even though she was the one who struck the first blow (metaphorically speaking), she is simply going nuts and it if fun to watch.
If she wins in the end it might not be such terrible for general population, compared what other villains like Discord "I will turn you all to my puppets (and have fun doing so)," Nightmare "You will love my night (and freeze and starve to death along the way)," or Chrysalis "I will eat you(r love)" intended. Just more zombies and dark magic all packed in some bullshit about freedom.
I can really see her to become leader of some Equestrian totalitarian successor state. Or she will declare total freedom and all will fall to anarchy on the spot. She might also fail and die, but I can't se other turn of events then "She died somepony got punished and everything got mostly to normal (plus some nightmares for Celly)" Celestia might go even nuts after this and world might end in fiery inferno but that is very wild guess.
I also noticed somebody complaining about your new picture. Yes I admit it is already used in The Immortal Game but honestly I couldn't care less. It looks good fits theme of story and it isn't like you make money from this. If I were you I would add some crap about crediting unknown author to silence trolls.
Overall aside from significant lack of marshmallows and gap in updating (I understand that, it's called life) keep up the good work. I will say this fic even places somewhere in my personal top ten.
Yes, Fuck Rarity.
3717241 LOL, didn't even need her for the costume!
Yeah, much as I'm enjoying the story so far, the strained excuses for not reviving Rarity are becoming increasingly...strained. The elements are a non-issue what with the fact that not only is she personally required to make them work, she has most of the other bearers on her side as well. It's becoming increasingly obvious that Rarity is staying dead because the author doesn't know how to write her into the rest of the story (happens to the best of us). Alternatively, she's being saved up for something big later.
I demand fan-art for Twilight's new look!
I wonder if Rarity will come back to life in a later chapter?
//hums
YESH! LUNA! Please turn over... please please please.
Also Necromantic Spitefire... I just got chills... sexy chills down my spine.
Nice job!
Why was it Lelouch?