A new generation of Cutie Mark Crusaders has arrived, but will they be as successful finding their marks as the last Crusaders were? Join the adventures of a very ambitious colt that wants to grow up as soon as possible, a pegasus that likes doing magic tricks, and a unicorn who has a bit of a sweet tooth, as they embark on the journey to find out what makes them unique.
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You changed the iguana's gender from male to female.
Have, not Had. I spotted that a couple of times.
Applejack would be his aunt, not his grandmother.
Other than that, good job. Have a like.
I'll wait until the second or third chapter before faving, to see where you're taking this and how much you improve.
This is what I get for sending a story while sleepy. The iguana is female, I must have put male by accident, I'll edit it. The whole grandma thing is what he calls her, not their actual family tree. The reason why Bloom also calls her grandma is because Stem began calling AJ that when he was younger, and it stuck. :P Still, thanks for the comment.
This is really cool! Well written, a great colt character, and an intriguing premise with lots of potential. Can't wait to see more!
One tiny nitpick: It's Applejack, not Apple Jack. Unless she decided on a change of name in the last few decades ^^