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Jord

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A mysterious stallion has appeared in Canterlot, what could he want? And why does he insist on speaking to the Princesses while cloaked and hooded? And what does his instrument have to do with any of this?

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The Arrival... · 25th Jan 2013 · 1,063 words
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Of the Third and a Second... · 29th Jan 2013 · 1,329 words
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Forces Change... · 6th Feb 2013 · 2,105 words
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Angel

Angel #1 · Jan 25th, 2013 · · · The Arrival... ·

A prologue explaining what happened to the third member of the trio would be nice, and I've seen one or two grammatical mistakes, but other than that, it is a good story. Tracking this, to see where it goes.

SpikeDark

SpikeDark #2 · Jan 25th, 2013 · · · The Arrival... ·

sounds like it will be one heck of a ride

Gabriel Arkanym

Gabriel Arkanym #3 · Jan 25th, 2013 · · · The Arrival... ·

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I gave a bit of information about what happened during his speech. I probably won't be adding a prologue but it will be explained more later in the story.
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Thanks! I hope it will be one as well XD

Also I know a lot of people are going to be mad about the whole OC Alicorn deal, because people always are. Still I just ask that you give me a few chapters before anyone judges too harshly.

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