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A platter of cupcakes

Why did pinkie pie do the things she did in cupcakes? It's a mystery to all and something she's been carrying her entire life...

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Rainbowdashplush3 #1 · Aug 19th, 2014 · · ·

1: This has really bad grammar mistakes in it. You should probably get that fixed.
2: It has a good plot but makes no sense whatsoever. You should get better at this kind of stuff. Also capitalize the names of the characters and places, like Pinkie and Equestria. Capitalize the start of the scentences too.