You seem to have javascript disabled, or your browser is failing to execute it properly. Much of Fimfiction's functionality requires javascript so we suggest you turn it on!

kitsune of canterlot

After being sent to the caves under canterlot, Twilight sparkle finds a being older than ponykind itself- inspired by the this day aria

Chapters (1)

Comments ( 5 )

Viewing 1 - 50 of 5
- Newest First
- Oldest First

OnlineImhotep

OnlineImhotep #1 · Jan 23rd, 2013 · · ·

This is you... trying to fix the grammar mistakes!?!?!??!!?!?!?!??!

Holy Shit...

Make Believe

Make Believe #2 · Jan 23rd, 2013 · · ·

Get someone else to fix your grammar.
Also, you don't really need to include the lyrics to the song. I'm pretty sure everyone here knows of it at the least. If you want you can link to it, but even that kinda ruins the flow of a story.
You are trying, which is good, but until you can find and fix all of your mistakes you're gonna need an editor.
But don't let yourself get bummed out though, all you need is practice.