When Rainbow Dash finds Nightmare Moon's helmet, she becomes possessed by anger, hatred, and jealousy, she becomes the new Nightmare Moon, and wreaks havoc over Ponyville. Can her friends stop her, or will Rainbow be beaten by the ultimate enemy, herself?
Please make longer chapters but other than that great story!
Thanks, sorry if the chapters are short, I don't want to make very long chapters, and school midterms are annoying, but I'll try
You know, these chapters looked a lot longer when I was writing them.
1962238 When will the next one be out?!
I'm working on the next chapter, but school is evil
Nightmare Dash, huh? Will read!
SCHOOL IS EVIL! Love the story :D
Good job buddy like the story needs more toasters
This is great for a first fic!
Just wanted to say it is stated fluttershy is older than pinkie pie, and the same age as rainbow. (I believe it was 21)
Ok, if I make any mistakes, lets just mark it up as an alternate universe, works every time.
Just finished chapter two. Yay for the doctor!
Thx, he's going to be a semi-main character.
lol. Best line ever! Can't wait to read more!
great fic (wait that is constructive criticism right, oh well)
Bookworm is an oc used in ponyville pranks on fanfiction
Really? Well, I'm still sticking with Bookworm for my OC, and also, I really think that you will like this story.
Great chapter! There was one pet-peeve I had though...
You spelled 'Pinkie' wrong. Other than that, can't wait to see next chapter!!
I will fix this problem, MUSTACHE POWERS, ACTIVATE!
Finally hot around to reading this!
Dafuq? Slendermane?! What is going on here??!!
That was a good chapter. One thing, though...
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If you're still here, please hurry and write more. It is a great story.
Spoiler:
He's gonna get his a[yay]s kicked
2249841 What? Oh no, rushing will simply not do. Take you're time, sir.
2796317 Yeabsolutely!
I'm experiencing a mild case of writer's block, but I've started up a new story called "Love is in Bloom"
Please make more please.
Well, I'm back, some of you I know, some I'm meeting for the first time. But the important thing is, I'm gonna be writing stuff.
More please, this is a good story.
Pah! This was going quite well for the first few chapters, then you had to ruin it by going Kitchen Sink Canon on us.
"In the show" does not mean "good" and it certainly doesn't mean "good for your fanfic". Most stories which include elements introduced after the first season don't actually need them. They overwhelmingly seem to be there just so the author can shout "Look how up to date I am on watching the show!".
why stop now it was starting to get good