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The Light Shadow

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Princess Celestia has taken power in a cruel and underhanded way. Rainbow Dash is the only pony who knows who is really responsible for thousands of deaths, including the execution of the truly innocent Princess Luna. Dash finds herself on the run, and perhaps in a fight for her life as well. Will the Queen fall? What will happen amongst the Elements of Harmony? Will Rainbow Dash survive? Even if she does, she knows that not everyone will.

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The Light Shadow Pt. 1 · 26th Mar 2014 · 1,171 words
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The Light Shadow Pt. 2 · 29th Mar 2014 · 1,134 words
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Inquisitor-Awesome

Inquisitor-Awesome #1 · Mar 26th, 2014 · 1 · · The Light Shadow Pt. 1 ·

Why complete when the chapter says pt.1?

Noted Sir

Noted Sir #2 · Mar 26th, 2014 · · · The Light Shadow Pt. 1 ·

Whoops! Didn't notice, gonna have to change that real quick

defunct321

defunct321 #3 · Mar 27th, 2014 · 1 · · The Light Shadow Pt. 1 ·

You really need to have a better explanation. Why was Rainbow Dash the only one who saw the guards, there are other pegasi right? Why are the Mane Six so scared, when they have gone up against approximately as scary as Celestia in the past? Where is Discord? (this one is easy to fix, just add in a couple sentences somewhere about how she killed him saying he was in on it with Luna.) When did Celestia become an idiot and believe burning her country down would be the best crime to frame her sister for instead of say killing Blueblood, another rival for the throne.

Noted Sir