• Published 11th Jan 2013
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Slender 'dawn of a new nightmare' - XenoJohn

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Prologue Chapter 4 (continued!)

Prologue Chapter 4

Only but a dream

My vision of static faded slowly and my body felt heavy.

I managed to pick myself up due to my other limbs that came out of my back.

As the static faded and I took my time to look.

I jolted up and looked around with my extra limbs coming out of my back in a paniced position.

It was night time.

I spone around and teleporting in different directions hoping to find my home and Rainbow Dash.

After a few paniced gasped I saw the cabin with the lights still out.

I teleported to the front door and hurried myself to Dash's bedroom.


I teleported in and Dash jolted as she saw me appear out of no where.

"DAD!" she screamed.
She jumped out of her bed and ran to me in a hug.
Whats wrong sweatheart? I asked.
Rainbow Dash looked at me with tears in her eyes, I didn't have time to question my reality but take whatever my daughter has to say.

"M-Monster!" she said sobbingly.
What? I asked the sobbing filly again.
"I-I was sleeping, th-there was a m-monster wh-who looked like you, and it-"
She duge her face into my suit and continued to sob. The feeling of relief took me and I stroked her mane.

It was a just bad dream Dash... I added to ease her sadness.
"I-It was?" The filly asked.

Yes Dashie, you're safe with me, the sun is neary up and-
"But what if I get the bad dream again!?" She said nearly about to be taken back to her sadness.

I didn't want her to cry and I decided to show her something that helps me when I have ever felt like she is now
Dashie let me show you something,
I held my hoof out telling her to follow me and she did so.

I took her outside of the cabin and I pointed up to the stars.

Look how they shine for you... I said.
Dash started to smile as she took her gaze at the shining stars.




We looked at the stars shining brightly just for us...


Both of us didn't make a sound...








Then the sun rose...

Author's Note:

well...



After a night thinking about this master piece while crying myself to sleep I decided to continue this!


Sorry that I cancelled this:fluttercry:

Comments ( 14 )

I am so happy too see that this is no longer cancelled! Also it's alright that you cancelled it, just as long as you continue to write it.

3258717 I will...
I thought that no one will view it anymore...
But I just need to let my imagination on the keyboard and make a story...:pinkiesad2:

if I don't get many likes or favs on my fics I'll still write for the entertainment I give to you all!:pinkiehappy:

3258742
Don't you worry I'll still be here to read your story's for the sheer reason your story's are really entertaining and really well thought out. Even if your grammar isn't the best but I eagerly await for any new chapters from you in the mean time, along with the entertainment.

3258804 well not every one is a master in grammer:twilightsmile:
But thank you my friend for staying beside me:pinkiesad2:

3258990
Well of course no one is a master at grammar for the sheer reason your always learning new words every day! Also your welcome for staying beside you.:pinkiesmile:

2614085 i resent your remark about me being a bad guy.....I;m a good guy

I WANT MORE STORY

4551108 in 20XX I'll continue this story

AAAAAHHHHH!! DAMN CLIFF HANGERS!!!! I HATE it when people do that but then I also do though.:unsuresweetie:

Your story has my full attention now keep up the good work update more soon :twilightsheepish:

7487825 I think he is either dead or left the channel, most of his stories are on hiatus and have not been updated since 2014

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