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........more please........:twilightsmile:

Hmmmm... Me Gusta. I am now somewhat anxious to see where this goes from here.
Also adding a 2nd chapter to Moon Phased due to a high demand for a second part. I thought I would let you know first.

Personally I would love if you continued the story, 5/5 :twilightsmile:

Nice! It seems like you could keep going and have a good story

ACHOOOO!!! *sniff* I find your fic very enjoyable my friend :moustache: I request for a new chapter.

i would continue this story i would like to see when sorin meets up with RD and PL for next week :twilightsheepish:

Well, should never end on a cliffhanger, i say at least 1 more chapter, even if they are very short.

Very nice work, I can't wait to see what comes from this :twilightsmile:

tuh-tuh-tuh-tuhhh-TWO THOUSAND VIEWS?!?!? :pinkiegasp:

tuh-tuh-tuh-tuhhh-TWO THOUSAND VIEWS?!?!? :pinkiegasp:

... Punctuate? I'm about 98% sure that's NOT the verb you meant to use there.

147367 do you have a better word to put there?

Poor Rainbow, she lost her boyfriend to a princess.But what did she expect? It's her own fault for letting the two have nookie in the first place. 10/10 for this story so far.

Soarin you stupid bastard, look at what you had and you threw it away...:raritydespair:

Chimi Cherry Chantastic!!! *Derpy's voice* Nice work brony :derpytongue2:

Lunar is very very very... well lets just say she is becoming quite the... ah buck she's a tramp! lol Moar plz!

I like it but it's too short

I liked the part with the ponies....

Could have used more clowns though... and maybe a shark!

:trollestia:

Not sure how I should feel about reading this... at first I was like :twilightoops: when it sounded like nothing more than Pony porn, then I was more like :pinkiesick: after reading the detailed sexual encounter and now I just feel :rainbowderp: because I no longer really mind it now that the story is progressing beyond just sex...
Anyway, I'll keep readin' til' I completely understand how I feel. Keep it up!

I cried more than Soarin'. :raritycry:
I'm a HUGE Soarindash fan but this story was still pretty good.

Reading the first two chapters was a bit awkward for me as this is the first Pony "porn" story I've read. (I've been goat stepping around them :twilightsheepish:) The last two chapters developed it into quite an interesting story though.

Poor Soarin... :raritydespair:

Can't wait for MOAR :moustache:

Can't wait for MOAR :moustache:

This is the kind of Luna I like most:pinkiehappy:Good job so far! Can't wait for MOAR!

1847864 I'm afraid there won't be more. A 5th chapter was written, but something in the site derped when I tried to submit it, and the entire thing was deleted. There are few things i hate more than having to redo something, so I dropped the story all together.

1873739 That's a shame. At least label it cancelled, would have liked to read more though.

1873739 :rainbowhuh: Why didn't you save a backup like I do?

hello and what the fuck were you thinking when you wrote this clopfic probably some fucked up shit because you made me feel dirty on so many levels man so many levels

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