All my life, I've done as I've been told. I've done my work, stayed out of trouble, and obeyed my elders. That's what life is about right? Doing things correctly? But, as I watch the pegasi, animals, and other winged creatures, I wonder. What would it feel like? If I were to fly- just for a moment- would the loneliness go away, as I think it would? Or would flying condemn me, consume me, contaminate me, until I am no better than them? I wish to prove them wrong, I wish it would be as joyous as I imagine. But do I take that risk, for what if when all is done, not only will my fantasies be broken, but all of what's left of my hope as well?
(as the story progresses I will add more character/category tags)
Chapters (1)
Dis gon b gud.
Soarin' character tag?
Not sure if obsession leaking through, or if this might get interesting...
AFTER-READ EDIT: So you just bit the bullet and made him Soarin', huh? Can't really fault you for that.
The name Allette sounds cool, though. How'd you get it?
Weird place to end it, but otherwise, not a bad first chapter.
YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!! So glad this passed through moderation fast! Congratu-fucking-lations! (no sarcasm intended, just excited) Keep working, and as always, I'll be here to help you along the way! Seems the others agree that this is a kick ass story!
2518434 Thanks!
2518647 Her full name (as will be revealed in later chapters) is Alette Amorette, which means 'winged heart'. And I didn't come up with it, one of my friends on RS did. I'll be telling him that the chapter's been posted, as soon as he decides which week to sign on.
2518888 I submitted it about twenty or so minutes before I left for my choir concert. I just got back less than ten minutes ago. (About nine and a half.) And I'll give you credit as editor if you want, just let me know.
2518923 Haha, no sweat (hurts to type so I'm making this short). I'll be on RS more in about a week. Editors are supposed to be the strong, silent types who back the writer to no end. In all honest, you don't have to if you don't want to. Not a big deal to me, I'm not that narcissistic. It's all up to you.
2518974 *looks for hidden cameras* Okay! (Yay, a Derpy! *squee* *hugz*) *continues looking for hidden cameras*