Twilight probably should have just contacted Celestia when everything first went down. Applejack reminds me of those old crash test dummie toys that they used to make, heh. I can't help thinking Fluttershy is going to come into play somewhere down the line, and I hope we get to see Rarity soon, I'd love to see her reaction to all this.
Heh, that's quite the story. I don't normally like the gore, especially not in this setting, but when the character is describing her own corpse while standing next to it, it kinda takes on a different shade. Very nicely written so far, and with subtle nods to the community (Dash should probably have exploded one more time, as an "aftereffect", heh), and even maintains the humor despite the apparent grotesqueness of the situation. Thumbs up well deserved.
At first I thought the book was a fanfic, but now I think it's a representation of multimedia, or corporate involvement. Pinkie is a cartoon character, Rainbow Dash a videogame character, Applejack a toy... will have to see where this goes, it's all quite interesting.
well that's ... hmmmm ... i'll go with "unexpected"
i was hoping this to come a closer to a conclusion and it kind of ... ummm ... i really don't know what to think about the book coming to life ... i'm interested to see where you go with it
Twilight clutched her head and sighed. “I hope we get this one wrapped up soon. I don’t know how much more of this I can take.”
Oh gods, my sides... I don't know how much more of this I can take either Twilight... Laughing, it's hurts so good...
Rainbow Dash with infinate 1-UP's Pinkie Pie now a rubberpony Applejack going to pieces often as a living mannequin Twilight Sparkle and her magic turned up to eleven on the dial
Let the shenanigans commence!
p.s. If anyone is playing The Black Knight, it's Rainbow Dash "Tis' but a scratch!" "But your arm's off!" "I've had worse..."
This continues to be a barrel of laughs, and it seems the fun has been multiplied. Also now we have an antagonist posing an actual threat but I'm not really gonna worry too much about that.
I'm expecting the story end with them meeting up with Rarity after all this, and it going like so: RDash: ... and that's how we beat him! Thankfully, the effect's gone, so I can return to being as awesome as I normally am. Rarity: So... you got hit by a curse from a sentient book that made you die repeatedly, and all the other girls needed to help you remove it and defeat the book. Twilight: Yeah, that sounds about right. Rarity: ... You do realize that if you all wanted to skip our spa appointment, you could simply say so instead of making up stories, right? Twilight: RDash: Applejack: We're telling the truth, Rares. Rarity: Now, Applejack, I'm surprised you'd join in on this! Everypony Else: *Sigh...*
2349484 Think of playing Final Fantasy. You just start and you can only do like 54 damage against something with a spell that is strong against it. Now let's say you cheat so you are level 999 and deal 99999 damage to things with max level spells that they should absorb and heal instead of becoming paste. That is what Twilight got.
I can't help but feel that fluttershy is going to need more therapy than is remotely possible in equestria. I'm also awaiting her to just get stuck screaming.
You NEED to do a one shot of Cupcakes in this style. I can see it now, Dash tied up to a board, pinkie still wondering how much she can cut dash up before she dies all while Dash is egging her on. BRILLIANT I SAY!
Also LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! I hope Celestia and Luna learn about this in some hilarious manner hahaha.
I'm still wondering why she didn't pick some apples right off the tree while at Sweet Apple Acres. As she said, it was nearly harvest time. Given the difficulties, I was sure that she was actually going to starve to death repeatedly. But then she got food in her.
Also, missed opportunity to let her do CPR and revive the earlier instance.
2355681 I thought my example was pretty good. my meds were wearing off anyways, I get wordy when that happens.
And I write a bit in my new story which people seem to be loving on since I have like 30-40 favorites, over 200 unique views, and I haven't checked that in 36 hours, so it is probably higher than that.
I suspect she'll snap like a Slim Jim, talking to herself that it's all a bad dream. Yes, just a bad bad dream and she'll wake up and all the... ketchup will be gone. Oh my, someone was very messy, there's ketchup simply everywhere. So much- oh! Whoopsie, I stepped in some. And Rainbow is just napping, she likes to nap. Nap on the floor, nap on the table, part of her napping through the broken window sill. Goodness me, I must be napping too. And soon I'll wake up and this will all be just a silly dream... Mmm, yes, any moment now...
I... What?
Finally! I waited longer for this than I desired! And if you keep up the humor my ribs will break!
Well, this has really turned into a series of very odd events. Keep it coming!
frist great chapter man I'm glad I predicted its arrival!
This is a hilarious story! Keep at it!
I love this story and am I the only one getting a big Evil Dead vibe from this, because it feels like it.
Twilight probably should have just contacted Celestia when everything first went down. Applejack reminds me of those old crash test dummie toys that they used to make, heh. I can't help thinking Fluttershy is going to come into play somewhere down the line, and I hope we get to see Rarity soon, I'd love to see her reaction to all this.
I absolutely love this story.
She's got the SCIENCE! GET DOWN!
*insert sexual comment here*
*hehe, I said 'insert'*
FATALITY!!
I'm torn between calling Pinkie a stupid *censored* (that is, her canon self) and LIFE IS A PARTY
OR DOES SHE? I'm suspicious now.
It's just a flesh wound!
I laughed so hard when Spike walked in on them!
When Fluttershy walked in however I was laughing so hard I was finding it hard to breathe!
Great job!
Heh, that's quite the story. I don't normally like the gore, especially not in this setting, but when the character is describing her own corpse while standing next to it, it kinda takes on a different shade. Very nicely written so far, and with subtle nods to the community (Dash should probably have exploded one more time, as an "aftereffect", heh), and even maintains the humor despite the apparent grotesqueness of the situation. Thumbs up well deserved.
At first I thought the book was a fanfic, but now I think it's a representation of multimedia, or corporate involvement. Pinkie is a cartoon character, Rainbow Dash a videogame character, Applejack a toy... will have to see where this goes, it's all quite interesting.
If Applejack ripped off Rainbow Dash's wings and pressed them against her back, would they attach themselves?
well that's ... hmmmm ... i'll go with "unexpected"
i was hoping this to come a closer to a conclusion and it kind of ... ummm ... i really don't know what to think about the book coming to life ... i'm interested to see where you go with it
this. This right here. I can't stop. Laughing!
2349129
excellent question.
also: what did the book do to Twilight?
It's an escalating cascade of hilarious misfortune. Love it
Oh gods, my sides... I don't know how much more of this I can take either Twilight... Laughing, it's hurts so good...
Rainbow Dash with infinate 1-UP's
Pinkie Pie now a rubberpony
Applejack going to pieces often as a living mannequin
Twilight Sparkle and her magic turned up to eleven on the dial
Let the shenanigans commence!
p.s. If anyone is playing The Black Knight, it's Rainbow Dash
"Tis' but a scratch!"
"But your arm's off!"
"I've had worse..."
Mr. Shit, meet Miss Fan...
Although, it would be more like Miss Dash, meet Miss Fan...
MOAR GORE
PWEAASSEE
This continues to be a barrel of laughs, and it seems the fun has been multiplied. Also now we have an antagonist posing an actual threat but I'm not really gonna worry too much about that.
Oh man this story keeps getting better and better.
I'm expecting the story end with them meeting up with Rarity after all this, and it going like so:
RDash: ... and that's how we beat him! Thankfully, the effect's gone, so I can return to being as awesome as I normally am.
Rarity: So... you got hit by a curse from a sentient book that made you die repeatedly, and all the other girls needed to help you remove it and defeat the book.
Twilight: Yeah, that sounds about right.
Rarity: ... You do realize that if you all wanted to skip our spa appointment, you could simply say so instead of making up stories, right?
Twilight:
RDash:
Applejack: We're telling the truth, Rares.
Rarity: Now, Applejack, I'm surprised you'd join in on this!
Everypony Else: *Sigh...*
That book is such a troll. Discord's maybe?
2349484
Think of playing Final Fantasy.
You just start and you can only do like 54 damage against something with a spell that is strong against it.
Now let's say you cheat so you are level 999 and deal 99999 damage to things with max level spells that they should absorb and heal instead of becoming paste.
That is what Twilight got.
2352869
soo... twilight heals instead of getting hurt?
2350192
This guy?
I can't help but feel that fluttershy is going to need more therapy than is remotely possible in equestria. I'm also awaiting her to just get stuck screaming.
You NEED to do a one shot of Cupcakes in this style.
I can see it now, Dash tied up to a board, pinkie still wondering how much she can cut dash up before she dies all while Dash is egging her on.
BRILLIANT I SAY!
Also LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! I hope Celestia and Luna learn about this in some hilarious manner hahaha.
'Bout damn time you updated.
Loving how this is going.... Evil book comes to life and curses them all, oh the chaos...
Also... Need to update this....
Evil Dead meets Final Destination meets Happy Tree Friends meets My Little Pony. Bloody fuckin' GENIUS.
~Skeeter The Lurker
(Also... Did I miss something? What's with the gold bar next to my name...? Or is this just April Fools?)
2354353 its a joke
2355210
Well. Balls.
I kinda like it. Sad to see it go tomorrow.
~Skeeter The Lurker
2352923
No, she was the player character in my example, the one with hax magic that does the uber damage to everything.
If there was a scale from one to ten and Twilight was just a one, she is now a 12. Better example?
2355678
ah. indeed it is
I'm still wondering why she didn't pick some apples right off the tree while at Sweet Apple Acres. As she said, it was nearly harvest time. Given the difficulties, I was sure that she was actually going to starve to death repeatedly. But then she got food in her.
Also, missed opportunity to let her do CPR and revive the earlier instance.
(that said, *, +)
2355681
I thought my example was pretty good. my meds were wearing off anyways, I get wordy when that happens.
And I write a bit in my new story which people seem to be loving on since I have like 30-40 favorites, over 200 unique views, and I haven't checked that in 36 hours, so it is probably higher than that.
It is Slender based.
2355215 ya...(a few hours later)
...IT'S TOMORROW RIGHT NOW BEWARE OF FULSE CHAPTERS AND COMMENTS
2356803
For you maybe. I'm still in the middle of April 1st. (East Coast Native, USA)
~Skeeter The Lurker
2356917 true true (sometimes I forget that)
Now I'm guessing that its night time over there
2358380
Not yet. Currently 6:30pm.
And I'm still gold. Somehow.
~Skeeter The Lurker
2358489 hum that's weird Maybe it dos not end until sometime elsewhere
2358959
Go read the blog. Gold stat is legit stat. (Least I hope so)
I just want to know how I got it and if I can keep it.
~Skeeter The Lurker
2353580
I suspect she'll snap like a Slim Jim, talking to herself that it's all a bad dream. Yes, just a bad bad dream and she'll wake up and all the... ketchup will be gone. Oh my, someone was very messy, there's ketchup simply everywhere. So much- oh! Whoopsie, I stepped in some. And Rainbow is just napping, she likes to nap. Nap on the floor, nap on the table, part of her napping through the broken window sill. Goodness me, I must be napping too. And soon I'll wake up and this will all be just a silly dream... Mmm, yes, any moment now...
Fantastic Four + Three Stooges + Final Destination + Ponies
Seems legit.
2358989 me too
2361765
Don't you mean "The Cutastically Fantastic Three and Sometimes Fluttershy"?
I kinda feel bad for Book, we was being relatively unhostile yet they treat him like shit and tried to destroy him.
I just hope the book does not detract from the shenanigans, cause I get the feeling it might by just a little.
Applejack is now HILAAAARIOUS.
Tis I the only one who noticed the cupcakes reference
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2784838 Jeff the pony are y reading this story
Do CPR on one of the fresh intact bodies