Before a little filly was taken by the robbers. A man found a baby filly outside of town and raised it. A few years later after a tragic loss of her father. She was on her own until this very day.
I am a film student who is learning to make visual effects, animation, and film editing. I also workout to keep my body healthy while boxing. Finally I used to be a High school Wrestler.
Before a little filly was taken by the robbers. A man found a baby filly outside of town and raised it. A few years later after a tragic loss of her father. She was on her own until this very day.
OK yeah I'm new at this. I don't write stories that much. But seeings how I love to read fics. i guess I can make my own story. So i kind of need help on this story gram part.
who is the filly?
nice
awww cute and dangerous
the poem in the end is a nice touch good job
This isn't very good, and unfortunately deleting every single negative comment you receive isn't going to fix that. You have some serious problems with your English. Some of the passages are practically comical because of it. Are you not a native speaker?
I would recommend getting a good proofreader before posting any more stories.