• Member Since 1st Dec, 2012
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thedandyman009


I am a film student who is learning to make visual effects, animation, and film editing. I also workout to keep my body healthy while boxing. Finally I used to be a High school Wrestler.

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Before a little filly was taken by the robbers. A man found a baby filly outside of town and raised it. A few years later after a tragic loss of her father. She was on her own until this very day.

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Comments ( 11 )
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Comment posted by Ice deleted Dec 29th, 2012

OK yeah I'm new at this. I don't write stories that much. But seeings how I love to read fics. i guess I can make my own story. So i kind of need help on this story gram part.

Comment posted by TwizzleDragon deleted Dec 29th, 2012

who is the filly?

awww cute and dangerous

the poem in the end is a nice touch good job

This isn't very good, and unfortunately deleting every single negative comment you receive isn't going to fix that. You have some serious problems with your English. Some of the passages are practically comical because of it. Are you not a native speaker?

I would recommend getting a good proofreader before posting any more stories.

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