Doctor Whooves was very smart, and everypony in Ponyville knew it. His ability to reason was unparalleled and his debating skills were top-notch. In fact, before he got involved with the Stallions Rights movement, he was a well-known political commentator and author, having written several books on philosophy, politics, and even religion. The fact that he held a Ph.d and several Masters degrees certainly helped the fact as well. Unfortunately, he was quickly discredited by the political opposition (Mostly the Sun Party) when he started casting his lot with Carmel. His current job was a low-paying one, stocking shelves at the Ponyville bookstore. Even there he was on probation for hiding the copies of Fifty Shades of Neigh and telling customers they were sold out.
Ditzy Doo is a mailmare, or was, until she got fired for badly battering several important packages. She had a sight disability, and to her everything was blurry and distorted unless she made a conscious effort to straighten her eyes, which was difficult and taxing. She also had a slightly air-headed personality, giving her the nickname "Ditzy". This did not mean, however, that she was stupid or incompetent. In fact, despite her bouts of clumsiness, she was famous for being a hard and dependable worker, friend, and even adopted mother to a sweet young Unicorn.
These two ponies, who seemed so different from each other to all observers, were getting ready to tie the knot. Everypony agreed that they were a cute couple, but nopony could have told you that they would ever get this serious. Their romance was truly one in a million, the exception and not the rule. It was a beautiful sight to behold.
Doctor Whooves was laughing as the music died down. "My dear, I must say I have never been so exhausted. Are all Pegusi as energetic as you? I haven't danced so much in my life!"
Ditzy smiled at him and nuzzled his side. "All I know is that I am approaching the happiest day of my life. I have never been so alive!" If it wasn't for her innocent tone, you would think she was being seductive.
The Doctor laughed. "I tell you, everything will be perfect. I have personally seen to all aspects of the wedding. There is not a mare out of place, or a problem left un-addressed." he smiled. If only Carmel would make his appearance...
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Pinkie Pie bounced along the sidewalk, seemingly without a care in the world. She was talking at a hundred miles a minute, and every word seemed to change the direction of the string. It was classic Pinkie Pie being Pinkie Pie.
Whereas usually her friends politely listened, Twilight was lost in her own thoughts, and largely ignored the party pony. Carmel has been arrested, and here I go to the Doctor's rehearsal dinner to spoil it all. I hate being the bearer of bad news... And to think, this atrocity happened in Ponyville. If the Princess were here, she would never have...
Pinkie was suddenly interrupted by Twilight suddenly shouting. "The Princess! Pinkie, if the Princess knew what was going on, surely she would step in! She will never tolerate this kind of injustice!" Twilight's sudden outburst was soon followed by another one of the same tone.
Pinkie gasped. "The Princess will want to stop the wedding? But they are such a cute couple! And I already planned the party, and I'm gonna make cherry changas for the first time, and..."
Twilight shook her head. "No, Pinkie. I'm talking about Carmel getting arrested today. I think the wedding is going to go fine." She smiled. If there's one thing she knows will never change, it's Pinkie Pie.
"Wait, Carmel got arrested again?" Pinkie looked lost in thought.
Twilight hesitantly nodded. "Yes. He was arrested in the cafe you found me in."
"That's a new record for him, Twilight. That brings his arrest time record to two and a half hours. That's pretty impressive." She spoke as if he had just won a pie-eating contest.
"Wait... what?" Twilight stopped, confused. "What are you talking about?"
"Duh! Every time Carmel holds a rally, he gets arrested shortly after. Him and I have been keeping track of how long it takes, and the previous record was Twenty-Three and sixteen-seventeenths of an hour. This is the shortest it has ever taken!" She laughed. "I will have to throw him a party when he gets out."
"Pinkie. You realize Carmel has been imprisoned on trumped-up charges, waiting for a trial in an unjust system, and this is a serious affront to freedom, right?" Twilight was amazed at how nonchalant Pinkie was to this whole dilemma.
"Yup. But I am not complaining about something I can't change. Carmel never does." Pinkie said, and started bouncing down the road again.
"Maybe we can't, Pinkie." Twilight muttered. "But the Princess can."
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The rehearsal dinner had gone splendidly. The Doctor couldn't be more proud of himself, having planned the whole thing. Everypony had gone home, getting a good night's rest before the wedding. This wedding was going to be...
WHAM!
The door slammed open, and confetti flew everywhere. "I'm here!" Pinkie Pie shouted. "I'm ready to help set up everything! I am gonna need streamers, and balloons, and party favors, and candy, and..."
The Doctor, though initially startled, recovered his composure. "Candy for decorations, Pinkie?" he said, giving her a quizzical look.
"No. Candy for me. I get kinda hungry." Pinkie said, and started setting up the room. The Doctor shrugged. Pinkie being Pinkie, as usual.
"Doctor Whooves, is it?" a voice said, behind him.
"At your service." As he turned around, he looked at Twilight with a thoughtful expression written across his long face. "I think I know you from somewhere... Oh yes! You are Twilight Sparkle, the princess's personal protege and bearer of the Element of Magic, correct?" His face went from a thoughtful smile to a suspicious glare. "What brings you here?" The Doctor asked. Everypony knew that Twilight was friends with the other element-bearers, most of which were enemies of Carmel's.
"I was asked by Carmel to come and tell you that he will not be here tonight." She looked around at the empty ballroom. "Though, I suppose it's a bit late for that." She said sheepishly.
"Really? Do you know what is keeping him?" The Doctor asked. "I know he wouldn't miss it for nothing. I hope he's okay."
"He kind of got arrested." Twilight said, cutting straight to the chase. "I'm still having a hard time believing it myself."
"Oh, it's just that? I was afraid he would be hurt or something." The Doctor said, tension leaving his face. "Carmel will be okay. He always finds a way out of those situations. I am down one best stallion, though. Maybe I can call..."
"Wha- I just told you that your best friend has been arrested on trumped-up charges, and that he is being held in custody for no good reason, and all you can think about is your best stallion at your wedding? What is wrong with everypony? Don't they realize this is a horrible miscarriage of justice and..."
He shushed her. "What kind of a stallion do you take me for, Miss Sparkle? I do care about Carmel, very deeply too." The Doctor, noting Twilight's confused expression, clarified. "He will be out within a few days. They never have enough to keep him for long, no matter how much dirt the prosecutor tries to dig up. I know this for certain. We have kept his record completely clean. It has almost become a routine, at this point. He is arrested, I create a public outcry, they have no evidence, and he goes free. We set up another rally, and the cycle starts over. We have tried to change the cycle, but all our attempts have been, at least thus far, fruitless."
The purple unicorn thought for a second. "I think I might have a solution to this mess. I can send a letter to the Princess, she can fix everything..."
The Doctor looked her square in the eyes. "I don't think that would be the best idea, Miss Sparkle. The Princess may be powerful, yes, but any interference of hers would put our mission of public acceptance in jeopardy. We are trying to win the public over, and such an affront to democracy would only make the public opinion sway away from our side."
"But... We must do something-"
"We can. We can fight. We are close. We have been struggling for this cause for years, and I feel that we are approaching the crux of our battle. You watch, Miss Sparkle. Mark my words. By the next election, things will be different." Whooves said, reassuringly. "I promise".
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Dear Princess Celestia,
I am writing to you about an issue that has recently been brought to my attention. The local democratic elections have been exciting to watch, but there is one small issue. The local laws regulate that only mares may vote, own land, or travel without papers. It is only because of the voting law that the others remain in play.
As if this weren't bad enough, recently the only stallion with the bravery to stand up to these laws has been imprisoned. I am afraid that these developments are leading in a direction that will be detrimental to our society. Democracy is well and good, but it must be stopped when the majority decisions infringe on the rights of the minority. Surely you can see this!
I was sent here to study the magic of friendship, and so far I have been successful. But, I am not so certain friendship can overcome all, anymore. All of my friends (except Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie) are siding against this equality movement. I fear that if I do anything, it may drive us apart. What is the correct course of action? Which is more important?
I suppose I am asking your advice, Princess. What should I do?
Your Faithful Student,
Twilight Sparkle.
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Thanks for the reminder.
Finished the chapter for you.
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Thank you guys. This means so much to me!
"You must do what you feel is right, of course."
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it's an interesting subject, about the whole "There's more Females then Males" thing in Equestia. It makes me wonder what rights exsit and don't exsit there.
Rainbow Dash curiousity.
This has my attention.
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Expect poor writing, crappy plots, but interesting ideas.
2776870 that's pretty much me in a nutshell. I have great ideas, but i'm shamefully over-looked by a few minor blemishes like, a poorly put togather word or something.
And with that, my time on the frontpage comes to an end.
Oh well. It was fun while it lasted. I just can't compete with...
Pound/Pumpkin cake shipping? OH FOR THE LOVE OF-
*This word censored by *
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Thanx! Going to change it nao!
well written , but im not trying to be mean when I say this but I hate stories that are like this with the mares being in charge of everything and the stallions being second hand citizens also I want to beat the shit out of all those mares!!!!!
YES. This story is great!
Try listening to For The New Lunar Republic while reading this story, it's fun.
Also... are your favorite ponies Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie, by any chance?
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Nope. It just seemed that they would be best suited to being neutral, or even on the side of the stallions (just not actively). Nice guess though!
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That is kinda the point of this story.
2776973 So, who is/are your favorite pony/ies? Twilight?
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You might as well ask me to pick my favorite stars in the sky!
I love all of them, in different ways. I suppose if I had to pick a fav it would be Applejack... She is just so reliable and awesome.
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Fixed! Thanx!
2777000 My favorite star is the North Star. See, I did it, why can't you?
If Applejack is your favorite, then why are you being so hard on her in this story? Why not just shaft Pinkie Pie, because maybe she holds elitist parties for the mayor that no stallion is allowed in?
...Wait, I just contradicted my own logic, because Pinkie is my fave.
moar
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Because... PONIES!
2777048 ...I see.
PONIEEEEEEEEEEES
ALL PONIES GO
2076001 Equestria under an Absolute Monarchy? Diarchy? Hmmm...
I shan't pick any sides, for the required power of the mind is too much for one simple man such as I.
EDIT: Definitely going to continue reading this. And yes, I commented before reading but I tend to skim through a story's comments before reading anyway (to get a gauge of what it actually is and how the author has wrote it).
I am surprised that only Ponyville is under a 'Democratic' government. I would have expected at least one more town/village to catch this and find it's advantages over an Absolute Monarchy. My 2 bits are thrown toward Appaloosa being the most likely.
Hooray! But I don't think the Princess is going to give Twilight an answer she likes. She's seems to be fairly aloof.
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I was also considering "Freedom is the right of all sentient beings."
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Troll on, trollestia.
I'm not big on politics, but it is interesting that the show hasn't touched it or religion (another thing I'm not too crazy about). I just finished the first chapter as of this writing and I find it interesting that you'd make it mirror our own world with females in charge of everything, but given the male/female ratio in the show I shouldn't be surprised.
My only gripe so far is the spelling, but I can fix it as I read. If you'd like a proofreader for future chapters and/or stories, I'll help out.
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Sure. When I finish the next one i'll call you up.
2778645 Cool cool. Out of curiosity, what do you use when writing? I use LibreOffice for my stories.
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I use Polaris Office (android). It is pretty useful.
If laws are unfair against minorities, it´s the duty of such minorities to disobey them in order to change them. What if all the stallions of Ponyvillle go on strike?
As Vincen Navarro said: "Mire, si no hubiera desobediencia civil, los negros todavía se sentarían al final del autobus" (Look, may not existed civil disobedience, black people would still seat in the back of the bus)
Certainly not a big fan of the idea that there is an unbalanced gender ratio in Equestria, but interesting nonetheless...
Meh.
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I would say the only way that you could count it as even is if you count the Royal Guards.
HEY! *ideas...*
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I've always considered the mare/stallion ratio seen in the show to be one of those things directly ties to the reality: This is a show designed to sell toys to little girls, and little girls tend to prefer female toys.
Given that ponies: A.) Produce through traditional means at a fairly normal human/horse rate and, B.) Normal monogamous marriage between male/female is the norm, I don't think that the idea that a huge gender disparity exists holds a lot of weight.
That said, this is a good story and I'm glad to see it updated.
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I'm with zacoda, personally. The show is aimed at girls age 6 to 12, so it's going to have more female characters than male. That doesn't necessarily mean the country of Equestria would have a major imbalance.
That being said, I still like the story. And there's an actual explanation readily available just in what you've written so far. According to your story, stallions left Ponyville early in its history because of the unfair treatment. So it would stand to reason that Ponyville would have much different gender demographics than Equestrian normal.
> if the Princess knew what was going on, surely she would step in!
...so, as established in the previous chapter Stallions left Ponyville in droves because of all this....and now you're saying the Princess doesn't know about it? What, did nobody think to tell her "hey, I had to flee Ponyville because they made a law taking away the rights I have under Equestrian law and in fact made it even illegal to leave."
They just, never mentioned it to her?
>All of my friends (except Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie) are siding against this equality movement.
>Everypony knew that Twilight was friends with the other element-bearers, all of which were enemies of Carmel's.
So which is it?
Related, you've yet to give any reason for Applejack or Rarity opposing Stallion's rights. Rainbow Dash is the only bearer who has any incentive at all.
Also, it's "all of whom." All of "which" implies the bearers are inanimate objects.
>The Princess may be powerful, yes, but any interference of hers would put our mission of public
>acceptance in jeopardy. We are trying to win the public over, and such an affront to democracy
>would only make the public opinion sway away from our side."
...what? This situation is much like if, in the United States, where rights like freedom of travel and land ownership are assured at the Federal level...some random city....say Los Angeles, decided to make it illegal for men to leave the city. It would be illegal for them to do so in the first place because it would violate Federal law, and it's ridiculous to suggest that the people of Los Angeles would say "oh, no...we need to just accept this and try to change public opinion here."
This whole thing just doesn't make sense.
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Applejack opposes Stallion Rights because of a legacy issue. Granny Smith was one of the founders who signed off on the Ponyville Constitution. That and Applejack is portrayed as a "This is how its always been done and that's how its going to be done" kind of pony. Asking her to break tradition is just asking for her to break your face.
I might have an idea for why Rarity opposes Stallion rights. It's because Stallions don't wear her clothing. Since no-stallion wears clothes (Closest we've seen is Big Mac's Collar/Harness, possibly Dr Whooves bowtie), she doesn't make clothes for them, since it would clutter up her sales floor. Rarity opposes Stallion Rights out of spite.
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Not Granny Smith. Granny Smith's mom.
While maybe she shouldnt have the princess fix everything if you agree with Whooves reasoning, wouldn't it be very beneficial to have Celestia publicly denounce the actions of the sun party?
I'm pretty sure Whorlestia advocates and supports those laws in Ponyville.
Her nickname is the same as her name?
PEGUSI (Imagine Lavender Town playing)
A little too exposition-heavy on this one. Whooves was not introduced very organically and it hindered his credibility in the story. Another issue that emerges is why Twilight is so quick to jump on board with the movement. She occupies a place in society where she would have been sheltered and unaffected from all of these things, and yet she displays no sign of being unaware, uneducated, or possibly naturally prejudiced (if unknowingly) when confronted with a confusing new idea. It comes across as a misaligned perfection she really shouldn't have, especially when numerous episodes focus on her various flaws in dealing with socio-intellectual conflicts and that she isn't free from bias or prejudice.