Just a guy with random interests that happen to coincide. Like writing and ponies.
While looking for special flowers in the Everfree Forest, Fluttershy stumbles across a mysterious colt. She nurses him back to health, and he seems quite friendly, but when her friends start getting injured in 'accidents', only Applejack suspects the new colt. Will she be able to tell Fluttershy about her suspicions before the unthinkable happens? FluttershyXApplejack, very strong, but untrue, hints of FluttershyXOC.
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Yeah i'm a beginer as well. Where are my manners. You are very good when it comes to acctually putting in shys real personality. I will be straight forward in saying that this story has potential ( hope i spelled that right), but make the next chapter longer. Any ways keep it up.
The story definetely seems interesting. I'm curious to see where this goes.
This is the most positive reinforcement I've ever gotten in my life at a single time, lol. I'll try to make them longer, thanks for the info.
108910 Pony pro tip: a colt is a young boy, it should be "Finding the Stallion"
Oh, sorry. Thanks for the info, I'll fix it.
Sorry for slow updates. I have the story written out completely already, but I'm making huge changes to it, like adding details, reworking some sentence structure, deleting entire sections and starting from scratch, that sort of thing. Also, my teachers seem to think that the best way for us to deal with Finals so soon is to pile us with a mountain of homework.
You don't have to stick around if you don't want to. It'll make me feel so much more horrible when I let you down.