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A rainbow at the end of the tunnel.

Rainbow Dash confesses her feelings towards Fluttershy and the two soon become attached. But will the rest of Ponyville accept their newfound love? Some will accept them as just another couple, but others will be wary to accept them.

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fabianguzman18

fabianguzman18 #1 · Oct 30th, 2012 · · ·

fluttershy why?

DianaWinters

DianaWinters #2 · Oct 30th, 2012 · · ·

continue please.

Silver Moon

Silver Moon #3 · Oct 31st, 2012 · · ·

Very interesting. I just have two questions.
Why did you give BIRDseed to squirrels?
Also, there was one line that did not make much sense.

“Are you willing to before than just friends?"

Did you mean “be more” instead of “before?”

Other than that, this shows promise. Keep it up.

NotMyNormalUsername

NotMyNormalUsername #4 · Oct 31st, 2012 · · ·

1538526 Because squirrels eat birdseed and I thought, for some reason, that I saw her feeding her squirrels birdseed. In one episode. I must have been mistaken. And yes, I meant 'be more'.
I wasn't actually planning to continue the story because I wrote it quite a while ago and I am kind of busy at the moment, but I'll try.
Thanks for reading!

Silver Moon

Silver Moon #5 · Oct 31st, 2012 · · ·

1540693
Take your time, I know life can be busy. I myself am working on a Flutterdash story and my last update was Sept 15. This story does seem to need more. Again, take your time. I never mind waiting for a good tale.