• Member Since 22nd Aug, 2011
  • offline last seen Apr 19th, 2014

JavaChips


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A story archive revolving around the Chips brothers, Java and Micro, and their adventures in Ponyville along with the residents. With there being no real storyline to these stories, it's open ended, adding stories to it as they come to me and I type them out. Nonetheless, I hope you enjoy the gripping tales of these two brothers.

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 17 )

it'd a great stpry with good characters, but one thing is bothering me, from what I've gathered about micro he seems to be the same age as applebloom why isn't he in school

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funny you should mention. in actuality Micro is in the age range between the mane 6 and the cutie mark crusaders. but yes he should be in school. I was actually thinking about that next chapter.

I like how all the genders are reversed in the pony verse versions of the games, wonder how they would call a game with a female main character like cooking mama

2543 Is... is your avatar Kamina-Celestia?

I don't think this day can get any better.

It's great how you have managed to integrate the two characters into Ponyville society so well, and the short stories could even be used as stories for series episodes the way they've been written.:pinkiesmile:

Yay an update!

Here's some sugestions: Element of Empathy, Element of Chivalry, Element of Bravery

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well there was colt of war...

Wow. Micro is persistent. Shot down twice, but still able to find a filly. Nice.:pinkiesmile:

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a lot of gamers have natural persistence. when we get knocked down, our determination forces ourselves back onto our feet

I know, I know... Java has a nice girl in Canterlot but some part of me would love to see more of his relationship. All those nice elligible bachelorettes in Ponyville. :rainbowwild::twistnerd::twistnerd:

I have a lot of mixed feelings about this collection up to now. There are a large chunk of chapters that are top notch. Then there are chapters that just seem a little slapped together in their construction. This one seems fine, although it probably could use a little editing.

I'm just going to say, if this isn't a priority, don't rush it. It's better you put out something of quality then to rush out something that isn't.

So now his girlfriend is in Ponyville...

Solves my problem! Whoop!

:fluttercry: *sniff, twas a nice while it lasted. A nice rounded ending for this collection.

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