As Luna awakes after a long trip to the moon she starts to set up camp... She explains her travels within her diary as she learns she may not be the only one on this godforsaken moon
As Luna awakes after a long trip to the moon she starts to set up camp... She explains her travels within her diary as she learns she may not be the only one on this godforsaken moon
Good concept, you need an editor badly tho.
1506569 yep im getting one and ill fix it soon working on chapter 2 i wont tell u how long she was gone tho XD
Ok I just wanna thank every one who gave me thumbs up it started as 5 down 4 up and now its 4 down and 9 up thank you thank you thank you XD
Its a good story. If you don't have an editor yet, I would be more than happy to do it.
For Luna to see an astronaut, makes me see Equestria as not so far away after all. Fascinating.
1546537 I would only hope that its not far away...
1506569 Actually, he just asked me to be his editor through email.
Feel free to tell me if my editor missed anything!
Dont worry my editor is taking a break... more like a nap... more like a I only-see-him-in-a-place-of-undisclosed-locationz-so-i-cant-tell-him-it-was-uppdated... Thank U editor makes my damn job easiar now for moar mustash
1590731 hehe get it instead of GOD celestia? ahh you have no sense of humor
ENCASE YOU MISSED I SHARED MY DOC IF YOU WANNA READ WHAT I MADE BEFORE IT'S RELEASED
Wow just got like... 3 dislikes cause i added myself :'(
1614871 I feel so unwanted!
i like this story
1615321 thank's
YAY FIRST
wheres the astronaught?
1695376 hehe you will SEEEE MWAHAHAHAHA
1696063 Thanks but I have one.. .you should check the doc me and him have some.... intreasting conversations...
Alt. Titile: Diary Of A Wimpy Princess: Moon Dayz
1782425 XD Mate
You SERIOUSLY need an editor, and to learn how English grammar works yourself.
When you have a story that needs the attentions of you or your editor like this... you wait. You fix the problems you find, and THEN you release it. You're missing commas and other punctuation everywhere, and the sentences not only don't read like Luna... they don't read very coherently at all. Sorry, friend, but you need to let the next one cook awhile longer.
1782441 *Sigh* Yaya ive heard it all before.... I'm working on it ok?
Maybe if you actually get a competent editor, I'll take back my dislike.
1807322 *sigh* Whatever I get the hate.... im rewriting and reediting... later... its late
And boom, the rocket blows up.
Problem, Houston?
1951523 Ahh Trollestia at her best, cold blooded murderer
Awwww.....
1807322 I'm plenty competent! I just intentionally disregard some (fine, most) mistakes because I absolutely despise getting emails about editing, not to mention the skype messages and actually talking to me.
1592918 Caps lock much?