Well. Now it's time for twilight to seduce the rest of the apple family I suppose. I feel so bad for spike but I can't stop laughing at him finding the worst times to find twilight
Good, really good. No really, i can´t wait to see what will happen in the Loyalty chapter or how Twi gonna end up having sex with RD or into which pony Spike will run next after somehow witnessing Twi humping Rainbow. Will there besides the Mane6 also Sun/Moon chapters and threesomes/xsomes or also other ponies like Trixie and Cheerlie or will you focus on Mane6 and surroundings like now AJ´s family catching Twi and AJ red-hoofed?
I think though it´d be nice if Rarity/AJ/RD/etc mention when they fell in love with Twi. The why got covered, at least kinda in Rarity´s chapter and pretty clearly in AJ´s, but the when would be interesting. Like who was the first who got a crush on Twi, who was the last? When did they meet and admit to each other that they all see in Twi more than just a friend and that they promised each other to continue to hold onto the promise to the Princess to avoid hurting their best friend/crush feelings? Something like that.
Fixed the HUGE derp in the Loyalty chapter where there was a large chunk of the Generosity chapter in there. How the buck did I miss that when I read it over?
My only worry here is that after all is said and done twilight wont want to go back to being a mare and will stay a stllion, which is kinad predictable especially givin the title, unless that's what your going for. that being said id prefer an ending where she either winds up a a herm or can swithc back and forth. still im interested to see where it will go. All in all a good story so keep it up
oh dear...twilight is in trouble...:X however, I must say: Amazing work so far. I always do enjoy a good gender swap story with the mane 6, and yours is going quite well so far, keep up the great work! :)
Poor Spike. Twilight is going to end up banging all his friends because Spike is bumping into them. Then he's going to find Twilight in action with the one he just ran into. Poor Twilight. Too pooped to pop out. I wonder he is going to get a just to say anything before Big Mac stomps a mudhole in him.
I for one greatly approve of this story, and I hope this ends up as a six-way love, Celestia knows how long I've waited for such a story, but I've only got a queston.
Are you trying to leave Spike with a lifelong trauma, you heartless monster?
If Spike losing his shit over and over again after seeing each one of his friends in bed with Twilight becomes a running gag, I will personally find you, author, and give you a shiny new silver dollar .
Uhh.. this chapter is the same as the last one...disregard above sentence, the problem's been solved.
Still FIRST
I think you just accidently the
whole chapter.the preview.1474510 1474527 I derped... I derped SOOOOO bad there...
(For those who are confused... I kinda double posted the Generosity chapter... It's since been fixed 6_9
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The Generosity chapter is still here, only now is the real Honesty chapter in front of it.
Well. Now it's time for twilight to seduce the rest of the apple family I suppose. I feel so bad for spike but I can't stop laughing at him finding the worst times to find twilight
yeah the generosity chapm is still here.... but this is golden, i couldn't stop laughing at spike poor dude.
Good, really good. No really, i can´t wait to see what will happen in the Loyalty chapter or how Twi gonna end up having sex with RD or into which pony Spike will run next after somehow witnessing Twi humping Rainbow.

Will there besides the Mane6 also Sun/Moon chapters and threesomes/xsomes or also other ponies like Trixie and Cheerlie or will you focus on Mane6 and surroundings like now AJ´s family catching Twi and AJ red-hoofed?
I think though it´d be nice if Rarity/AJ/RD/etc mention when they fell in love with Twi. The why got covered, at least kinda in Rarity´s chapter and pretty clearly in AJ´s, but the when would be interesting. Like who was the first who got a crush on Twi, who was the last? When did they meet and admit to each other that they all see in Twi more than just a friend and that they promised each other to continue to hold onto the promise to the Princess to avoid hurting their best friend/crush feelings?
Something like that.
Fixed the HUGE derp in the Loyalty chapter where there was a large chunk of the Generosity chapter in there. How the buck did I miss that when I read it over?
1474863 You'll see. I focused on the Mane 6 for this story.
My only worry here is that after all is said and done twilight wont want to go back to being a mare and will stay a stllion, which is kinad predictable especially givin the title, unless that's what your going for.
that being said id prefer an ending where she either winds up a a herm or can swithc back and forth.
still im interested to see where it will go. All in all a good story so keep it up
oh dear...twilight is in trouble...:X

however, I must say: Amazing work so far. I always do enjoy a good gender swap story with the mane 6, and yours is going quite well so far, keep up the great work! :)
Oh ho ho. This is going to be fun. have a stache.


*dies. Laughing* :D GLORIOUS.
...
And then we find out Twilight knocked 'em all up.
great chapter and good story.poor spike, maybe he should stop trying to go for twilight's friends.
Poor Spike. Twilight is going to end up banging all his friends because Spike is bumping into them. Then he's going to find Twilight in action with the one he just ran into.


Poor Twilight. Too pooped to pop out. I wonder he is going to get a just to say anything before Big Mac stomps a mudhole in him.
I for one greatly approve of this story, and I hope this ends up as a six-way love, Celestia knows how long I've waited for such a story, but I've only got a queston.
Are you trying to leave Spike with a lifelong trauma, you heartless monster?
Let's go onwards!
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You aren't treating Spike very nicely...
Spike is having a really bad case of being in the wrong place at the wrong time.
I kinda feel bad for Spike....
Ok, I'm lying
If Spike losing his shit over and over again after seeing each one of his friends in bed with Twilight becomes a running gag, I will personally find you, author, and give you a shiny new silver dollar
.
Yikes, poor Spike and poor Twilight,
is already a very big stallion, so now that he's mad... Dis gun b gud. 


I'm beginning to see a trend here...
Spikes going insane
Shit just the fan
Big mac is angry..
Now to the next chapter...

Spikey-Wikey is the butt-monkey
....and Big Macintosh is pissed!!
Oh snap, what next?!
And thus Dusk Shine was launched into the neighboring solar system.
oh i remember this story and that firearms exist in it
Nope, I take back what I said last chapter. I'd much rather be Spike HERE.