ojeze Poor(?) Twilight Sparkle, will you ever have enough time not having intercourse or fulfilling someone's physical or emotional needs (which could include having intercourse) to ever work on that way to return to being a mare?
I would like to see a small continuation of this. not much just a little bit of life with the foals.. maybe Spike and the CMC get together or something.
A comedy where every time he is with one of them Twilight walks in.. Over and over again. let Sparkle see what its like..
I also want to see how Ponyville and canterlot reacts to the foals.
I agree with Archivist, a SMALL continuation of this would be nice to see. Maybe life with the foals, how they're handled, the chaos they cause, so on, so forth.
This story caused me physical pain as I read it. Why didn't I opt out after the first chapter. Why didn't I stop punching my leg. I'm just glad I manged to not break my nose on my desk.
And might I say, that was pretty freakin good for being written on the spot. Also, that ending... Poor emotionally scarred Twilight. Being propositioned by his/her own childhood foalsitter. In front of his/her brother no less.
I request... a SEQUEL! Not just an excended Epilogue, but a brand new story to follow along the path of Twilight's Foals......... And if she(er, he now) actually ended up helping Candance and Shining with their 'foal' troubles dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
"Oh for the love of Celestia" Already got it Twi. My only complaint: you got them all pregnant, but no twins/triplets/quadruplets/sextuplets/some other 'uplets'
Definitely liked this, I knew it wasn't just clop, but now at least it feels like it was only half clop. NTS: Avoid insane spurges with pain, inform others.
While the sex was more of a benefit (and I'll admit I skimmed a few of the sex scenes), the world building elements in this story were brilliant! I only wish they could somehow be incorporated into the show! Scootaloo as Lyra and Bon-Bon's daughter via magical impregnation, Twilight becoming the first Alicorn prince and susequently marry her friends and their subsequent incorporation as princesses, the sexual dimorphic effects of the potion, and the birth of the first Alicorn foals (named Solaris and Selene no less- somepony read Warming Up) are all very neat ideas I wish could be real. Yet, the only reason I don't see it happening is some of the elements may be over the heads of such a young audience while also being perhaps a little too much (polygamy isn't exactly something America likes and when was the last time a children's show aired that challenged America's ideals *rolls eyes*).
Now, *looks around* where's the sequel/more chapters?
I can see the nobility going about eighteen grades of apeshit - not only did this upstart (and to their eyes artificial) alicorn become royalty and a herd stallion, but he's also knocked up the Royal Sisters.
So Twilight will have seven co-wives, and two short of a baseball team of foals. Talk about a Royal Family . . .
Veeeeeeeerrrryyyyy nice. I kinda like it not being clop. MOAR EPILOGUE
This isn't a spelling error: "By the end of that day, somehow, all five mares had given birth, and the most exhausted one of them all was the Prince." Twilight, first, is no mare any more and second, has not given birth :P
1484996 Epiepilogue: And then when it's Cadance's turn, she has sextuplets. She passes out in shock when she finds out. Followed by Shining Armor. Followed by Twilight Sparkle. :D
This was one of the best stories that I have ever read on this site that didn't eventualy get boring from super sizing.
Critic mode active: There are some errors when Twilight was doing the dirty. Every now and then you would call Twilight 'she' or 'her' instead of 'him' or 'he'. Same with the foals, specificly Rainbow's. Colt and she are not same gender!
1485042 Hey, Cadence could have twins! Seriously - who in their right mind would dare quesgion not one, not two, but FOUR (counting Cadence) Alicorns AND the EoH as to who gets to boff who? Blueblood would find very quickly that one's ass CAN be too thoroughly reamed....
Impotent Shining Armor?
Now that's just sad, even if it means sexytimes for Twilight and Cadance :P
1483358 XD oh vash you just made my day
At last, it's finished, dood.
And Twilight is the main reason why Cadance agreed to marry Shining Armor in the first place, dood.
ojeze
Poor(?) Twilight Sparkle, will you ever have enough time not having intercourse or fulfilling someone's physical or emotional needs (which could include having intercourse) to ever work on that way to return to being a mare?
We need another epilogue...epiloqception
I would like to see a small continuation of this. not much just a little bit of life with the foals.. maybe Spike and the CMC get together or something.
A comedy where every time he is with one of them Twilight walks in.. Over and over again. let Sparkle see what its like..
I also want to see how Ponyville and canterlot reacts to the foals.
I agree with Archivist, a SMALL continuation of this would be nice to see. Maybe life with the foals, how they're handled, the chaos they cause, so on, so forth.
That ending....
ok good sir you are an amazing author... full of suprises arent you? had me laughing so much through the series ♥
1483957 Ma'am actually, and in about a week, I'll be a mom for a second time.
...I'm surprised Luna didn't make a "double" joke seeing as twins.
Hmm, and I just thought about this... are the royal foals siblings or cousins?
Begin debate... NAO!!!
waaaaaa
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you made my day with this story, it was amazing to read all this in 1 day
also the end
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Hmm ... I have no clue. Separate moms -> cousins, but same dad -> siblings.
............... WE NEED A NEW WORD!!!!
1484158 Half siblings. They share a single parent.
1483979 Congrats. And if i may throw out the idea of a full blown sequel. I mean all of the family hi jinx would be awesome.
dam thats a funny way of ending a story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story caused me physical pain as I read it. Why didn't I opt out after the first chapter. Why didn't I stop punching my leg. I'm just glad I manged to not break my nose on my desk.
1483979 Congratulations!
And might I say, that was pretty freakin good for being written on the spot. Also, that ending... Poor emotionally scarred Twilight. Being propositioned by his/her own childhood foalsitter. In front of his/her brother no less.
I request... a SEQUEL! Not just an excended Epilogue, but a brand new story to follow along the path of Twilight's Foals......... And if she(er, he now) actually ended up helping Candance and Shining with their 'foal' troubles dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
SEQUEL!
>> I agree with what he said. I'm happy with the ending but want more. Its so much fun. Poor twilight
1484928 I felt is was a sweet thing too do for Scoots.
"Oh for the love of Celestia" Already got it Twi. My only complaint: you got them all pregnant, but no twins/triplets/quadruplets/sextuplets/some other 'uplets'
Definitely liked this, I knew it wasn't just clop, but now at least it feels like it was only half clop. NTS: Avoid insane spurges with pain, inform others.
Any chance of a non-clop focused follow-up?
While the sex was more of a benefit (and I'll admit I skimmed a few of the sex scenes), the world building elements in this story were brilliant! I only wish they could somehow be incorporated into the show! Scootaloo as Lyra and Bon-Bon's daughter via magical impregnation, Twilight becoming the first Alicorn prince and susequently marry her friends and their subsequent incorporation as princesses, the sexual dimorphic effects of the potion, and the birth of the first Alicorn foals (named Solaris and Selene no less- somepony read Warming Up) are all very neat ideas I wish could be real. Yet, the only reason I don't see it happening is some of the elements may be over the heads of such a young audience while also being perhaps a little too much (polygamy isn't exactly something America likes and when was the last time a children's show aired that challenged America's ideals *rolls eyes*).
Now, *looks around* where's the sequel/more chapters?
Hmm. A plural marriage!
I can see the nobility going about eighteen grades of apeshit - not only did this upstart (and to their eyes artificial) alicorn become royalty and a herd stallion, but he's also knocked up the Royal Sisters.
So Twilight will have seven co-wives, and two short of a baseball team of foals. Talk about a Royal Family . . .
Twilight Sparkle, pimp.
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This story is absolutely flawless.
Sequel.
I demands it.
And now the tale of parenthood. This is sure to be good. AND YOU BETTER WRITE IT!
1484158 they would be step siblings, having the same father, but different mothers.
ALL THE BABBIES!
I loved this, I mean, the way you built it. I can't.. you know what. Fav, Thumbs up, I applaud your work.
Veeeeeeeerrrryyyyy nice. I kinda like it not being clop. MOAR EPILOGUE
This isn't a spelling error:
"By the end of that day, somehow, all five mares had given birth, and the most exhausted one of them all was the Prince."
Twilight, first, is no mare any more and second, has not given birth :P
This is creative. You Sir are very creative.
Next time do not drink so much coffe and go to sleep early.
Lol, that ending.
I demand MOAR of this story!!!
Thank you for writing an epilogue
I had fun reading this story, it's a bit sad that it's already over though.
My head is spinning from images.wikia.com/animalcrossing/images/7/73/Applejack_eye_roll_so_much_win_by_fundz64-d4w4pd5.gif
1484158 ½ siblings. :P Yes, I know how to plop down the ½ symbol without using character map. FEAR MY TYPING PROWESS~! :3
1484996 Epiepilogue: And then when it's Cadance's turn, she has sextuplets. She passes out in shock when she finds out. Followed by Shining Armor. Followed by Twilight Sparkle. :D
...Yes, Sequel. MOAR, because MOAR!
1483979 oh, dearest apolgies! Hehe congradulations!!! ♥
You will write moar, because we demand it.
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1487742 Moar
There, I wrote moar. I hope you're satisfied. In fact, if you look, I wrote moar twice. Three times actually...
best. ending. ever.
GOD that ENDING!!!!! OH DAMN!
Well, that was fun!
However, defiantly not going into my head-cannon.
This was one of the best stories that I have ever read on this site that didn't eventualy get boring from super sizing.
Critic mode active: There are some errors when Twilight was doing the dirty. Every now and then you would call Twilight 'she' or 'her' instead of 'him' or 'he'. Same with the foals, specificly Rainbow's. Colt and she are not same gender!
1485042
Hey, Cadence could have twins!
Seriously - who in their right mind would dare quesgion not one, not two, but FOUR (counting Cadence) Alicorns AND the EoH as to who gets to boff who? Blueblood would find very quickly that one's ass CAN be too thoroughly reamed....
Moar Dash anal?
Twilight needs to learn to turn his SWAG off dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
This was so awesome-ly epic, along with that ending scene with Cadance was too funny, I hope there is a sequel or something.