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Pestilent Swarm

What happens to a pony when he has to fight those who took away his family?
Can a Changeling fight for his friends against his own kind, and keep his race a secret?

Coast's hometown is the sight of the beginning of a massive changeling invasion. His brother, and best friend, is kidnapped and replaced by a changeling who tries to pull off the disguise and fit in to pony society.

Through war, a small group and some friends attempt become close, and stay close, to find a way to stop the spreading Swarm.

Chapters (2)

Prologue Pt.1/6 Infestation · 2nd Nov 2012 · 2,075 words
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Prologue Pt.2/6 Assimilation · 2nd Nov 2012 · 2,264 words
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Firebison

Firebison #1 · Oct 15th, 2012 · · · Prologue Pt.1/6 Infestation ·

Hey people who might read, this is the first thing that i have ever written. I plan on writing at least one chapter, maybe more, per week. please just be fair with reviews. ty

Wand3r3r3

Wand3r3r3 #2 · Oct 24th, 2012 · · · Prologue Pt.1/6 Infestation ·

Fair enough plan you have there. The only thing you can do from here is get better at this. Some people may offer to give you advice as well.

Also, I really like your style of writing!

Firebison

Firebison #3 · Oct 29th, 2012 · · · Prologue Pt.2/6 Assimilation ·

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Glad you seem to like it. I'm new to writing and just want to become more immersed in the community. i hope i get some pointers from some kind readers, it would be very appreciated!