Chapter four is up, with new art and new adventures!

Classic Fluttershy, always ruining Spike's fun.

Still nice update and great spotlighting on Rarity's and Fluttershy's friendship.

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Stories, you are a genius.

I'm amazed at your seemingly endless well of alliterative vagina names.

1479191 I liked the old cover image better, just saying.

Also I love how Spike walked in at the wrong time, he never gets a break does he?

"Sharing kindness," Fluttershy said, wistfully.
"It's an easy feat," Rarity said,

And magic makes it all complete

Um good

OMG! in a good way!

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYMMMMMMM!

for some reason I hear Cootershy's voice as a male with a scratchy voice

Oh GAOWD! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy_invert.png I don't know how to feel...

i have to say i like the old picture more but i see a reson as to why you picked this new one.

This is getting interesting.

o.O ... I can't say anything but wow. The way you play Rarity here is just pure wow.

YES, YYYEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSS.

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That was a gimme, though, as everypony should know the English opening theme by now.
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>"Open wide, darling," Rarity said, "We're going to see how long you can hold your breath."
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1479263 Are we still on this?

1479191 Oh, I thought I remember that image! Wasn't it part of the art for Fluffershy?

1479288 uhm, on to what?

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I think PhazonExposure is talking about identifying who's voice you think of when you read Cootershy's dialogue.

1479284 what does Gimme mean ??

1479295 Look back at the other comments. There's a shit-ton of speculation on what Cootershy sounds like. I think at one point, Bronystories might have associated Fluttershy's angry Gala tone with that talking vagina.

I do not cease to read. But this is still completely strange.
Awaiting further releases.

My thoughts at the start of this chapter:
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.....oh god why?
i dont care about most of this because its funny, but that last thing was ridiculous
oh boy, this gonna be GYYUUUUD

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Gimme is a colloquialism for "give me" or "give it to me", and is used in this sense to denote something assumed to be so easy, it's a given that it would be caught or done.
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What's good, nyagga?

Anyway, excited to see what comes next.

AJ is not going to be happy about what comes next...

1479363 yay I'm smart now

end of the chapter:

That's it, I officially give up writing. As should every other person on this site. We should all snap our pens because this.... THIS is the pinnacle of humor writing. Nothing this wonderful will ever be written again.

This is love, and I crazy it.

1479263 O_O

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i vote the latter art
but anything you like is fine with me i guess

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Thank you for the kind words. I'm very flattered. I'm also quite pleased with how this chapter turned out.

Don't give up writing, though!

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Well, it's not really a 'vote' system; the other artist asked for Bronystories to change it, he did. The End.

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that's why i said what every becomes i am fine with it...
just letting my voice out of the matter that some pll like the other art coffer better cant judge me on that

("Sharing kindness," Fluttershy said, wistfully.

"It's an easy feat," Rarity said, )

Me: And magic makes it all complete!

"Stick it in me!" Cootershy squealed, "I'm ready!"

"Don't be silly," Rarity said, "Big Mac will be the one to deflower you. This faux stallionhood is for Fluttershy."

"For me?" Fluttershy said nervously, "What do you want me to do?"

"Open wide, darling," Rarity said, "We're going to see how long you can hold your breath."

Bahahahahahaha

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That's what you're reading.

1479367LIKE MAH FACE!

The original pic was better.

open wide
just one thing, i liked the previous cover image more

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We got a code black, CODE BLACK!

For some reason I keep reading Cootershys lines in the voice of Sean Connery.

When I'm done with our lessons, Cootershy will be more refined and Fluttershy will be more amorous."

Why do I get the feeling this won't end the way she planned?

I am surprised Rarity didn't offer to trim Cootershy's hedges, you know with how little attention Fluttershy pays to that it probably has more bushes than the Everfree forest.

Open wide=Bend over

"Twilight was right," Fluttershy said, "You are a cunt."

Curse me and drinking soda while reading!
Now my monitor and keyboard are all sticky...

anyway, your story makes Luna happy!

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"Open wide, darling," Rarity said, "We're going to see how long you can hold your breath."

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What have my eyes seen on this computer screen?

I'd hate to imagine Morgan Freeman narrating Cootershy.
On the other hand Bill Cosby would be hilarious.

"Fluttershy, I think your marehood wants a divorce," Rarity said, hesitantly, "Don't you have anything to say?"

Oh damn, that's a reference to something but I don't know what it is!

"Today's the day I confess my love for Rarity," Spike said, "It's the kind of day where nothing could go wrong!"

And then something went wrong!

1479416 No no, more like this:

"Sharing kindness," Fluttershy said, wistfully.
"It's an easy feat," Rarity said, "especially for the Element of Kindness."

And masturbastion makes it all complete!

1479241 I have to agree the old cover art was better.

Oh god mykincaidshamburgers.com/images/sides.jpg