Rainbow In the Dark
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Looks good! I only see a few typos which, being me, I have to point out
It's (with apostrophe) should only ever be used as the contraction of it is. The possessive of it has no apostrophe.
Also, threw is the past tense of throw. What you want is through.
Specks, not specs ('specs' is short for 'specifications'). Second, you want "fused," not "infused." Also, that would read better as one long sentence, thus:
I apologize for not catching the fused/infused mistake earlier.
'Surly' describes somepony who's grouchy. You want 'surely,' as in, 'in a sure manner.'
1469974 See, that is why I like you! Because I'm terrible at grammar when I get lazy, but you, no sir, you always find the errors and I LOVE IT
Excellent. I look forward to more.