Haven't read the whole thing yet, but I agree with Cosmonaut, this thing is brilliant so far! Are they going to write off Rumble's change as a "growth spurt"? Because that's one hell of a mental leap of faith to take! I guess I'll just have to read and find out!
1437428 It's been proven there's technology in Equestria, like the arcade in Hearts and Hooves Day, the commercail where Pinkie plays that video game on a television, and much more.
"Alright. Remember to drink lots of fluids... Or, I guess if you're smart, you could wait for Flitter and Cloudchaser to come by and they'll help you with that."
It was a strange sort of good; like someone was tickling him in a way that took all the agonizing discomfort of uncontrollable laughter and condensed into a warm, happy, sort of desperate feeling.
I can tell the writer is male just bu this perfect description!
I know how you feel Rumble. I remember when it turned out I had a crush on a girl who happened to have a crush on my brother. No wonder I hated him back then...
The moment his hoof touched the spotted skin standing up between his hind legs, the engorged length of flesh twitched. Involuntarily, Rumble's eyes closed, and he let out a soft groan. Woah. Well, this was a growth of some kind... he wondered if Zecora had misinterpreted exactly what he'd meant.
And if she misinterpreted him, was it unintentionally?
Besides which, Cloudchaser might grumble, but both pegasi liked Rumble. They spent enough time around his brother to know he was going to grow up into a handsome lady killing stallion, which meant they should take advantage of his innocence and cuteness while it was still around.
They also get to call dibs for the time he finally grows up. A time which may come sooner than they could possibly expect...
Heheheh, and now things are going REALLY going to get exciti--AWKWARD!!!--I meant awkward, when the truth of what he's done to himself becomes known to the two hotties awaiting him.
10/10 I approve considerably!
Wind Beneath Her Wings
I see what you're doing here... Don't lie to me, I see everything.
EVERYTHING
I haven't read that far into the chapter, but it seems like Zecora gave the kid Ayahuasca* with some aphrodisiacs brewed in there.
*Ayahuasca is an incredibly powerful psychedelic brew from the Amazon rainforest.
If i ever grew that fast I would have to have to have two pegasisters by me for supportzipmeme.com/uploads/generated/g1339555353309728966.jpg
Was the "It's time for school" comment supposed to be a joke? I thought it was the middle of summer.
Also, the couch is leather? (I know, I know, it can be hard to remember to avoid that particular material...)
1422199 Than how many numbers do I hold behind my back?
this seems good ill continue to read for now...
Haven't read the whole thing yet, but I agree with Cosmonaut, this thing is brilliant so far! Are they going to write off Rumble's change as a "growth spurt"? Because that's one hell of a mental leap of faith to take! I guess I'll just have to read and find out!
seems like its about to get all bow chikka bow bow up in here
It Was like super puberty.
Something that's an absolute pet peeve of mine is how 'guys' is being used here.
Also it would seem that there are televisions, as well as a movie player and discs, in this fanfic's universe. Did I miss something here?
Don't mean to break away from the main topic but what are there cutie marks?
1422199 what exactly did he do there?
1432268 supuberty?
still waiten on da clop
Neat.
See? I take such good care of you, I even edit retroactively. GodDAMN, I'm awesome.
its like that one movie
rumble...go & get you some.
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It's been proven there's technology in Equestria, like the arcade in Hearts and Hooves Day, the commercail where Pinkie plays that video game on a television, and much more.
3898111 Way back in mid-October 2012 that was.
How so?
4056568 PFFFFFTTTTTT!!! Ok, the minute I read that, I just burst out laughing. "How so?" Really? Heh heh heh...
fluids...heh heh heh...I'm sick.
It was a strange sort of good; like someone was tickling him in a way that took all the agonizing discomfort of uncontrollable laughter and condensed into a warm, happy, sort of desperate feeling.
I can tell the writer is male just bu this perfect description!
1429664 no no, you gotta do this like Two Broke Girls: Brown chicken Brown cow!
Another good chapter~
Hehehe, this is progressing nicely~ I wonder how the two will react to Rumble's new look?
8D
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Pfffft XD hehehehehe.
Ah, I remember when i popped a boner the size of my leg around my brothers girlfriends.
This fic really takes me back.
I know how you feel Rumble. I remember when it turned out I had a crush on a girl who happened to have a crush on my brother. No wonder I hated him back then...
4056568 By forcing it down his throat, it just bringing the cup to him.
And if she misinterpreted him, was it unintentionally?
They also get to call dibs for the time he finally grows up.
A time which may come sooner than they could possibly expect...
Found a typo:
The underlines word is missing in your version.
Heheheh, and now things are going REALLY going to get exciti--AWKWARD!!!--I meant awkward, when the truth of what he's done to himself becomes known to the two hotties awaiting him.