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Tundricwolf


An Alicorn and a Saiyan gain friends and a family. What will come next for them in this chapter of their lives?

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After an Ancient Alicorn of Snow and Water discovers a strange baby, she take him and raises him as her son and her student. After many years of exploring the vast land of Equestria on their own, the two soon find themselves with a newfound group of friends and family.

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This is a remake of my original story, My Little Dragon Ball: Icebound. Many things are going to be altered, but a good chunk of ideas will be a part of this story, like my redesigns of characters.

Chapters (24)
Comments ( 189 )

How old is arctic Anyways? Because of what I'm seeing right now, I'm thinking he's not any older than ten.
Also good story I like it so far

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Arctic right now is in his early 20’s, say 20 - 23 or 24. I haven’t quite figured out a set age, but that’s kinda around his age in the story. He’s around the same age as the mane 6. I’m sorry if I didn’t make that clear.
And thank you!

Will this story still have at least one female Dragon Ball OC in it?

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Yes there’ll be a female Dragon Ball oc later in this story

I'm impressed with how the remake has kicked off, and I'm eagerly looking forward to what comes next. With any luck, we'll get to witness Goku and Frieza in action in the near future.

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I’m glad to hear that. I do have plans to have the z warriors appear in this story. I’m still working out how to properly incorporate them into it at the moment.

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And again if you have any kind of suggestions, feel free to let me know.

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Oh Okay, he was giving off ten year old vibes a lot Maybe in the future making him little more mature.
Just a friendly heads up😁

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Thank you.
I’ll try not to have him give off vibes that make him seem real young in the future.

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Ok. Here is my suggestion: When Arctic and all of the ponies meet the Z Warriors and more importantly Goku, it should be somewhere in Dragon Ball Super. Where Goku and Vegeta are in Lord Beerus world and both have been training under Whiz. And Arctic could unlock his Super Saiyan form when he battles either Goku or Vegeta. And Arctic personal form could be either Super Saiyan Silver, Super Saiyan Ivory, or Super Saiyan Pearl.

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Arctic already has ssj in the story. Though your suggestion is giving me ideas for what could happen should Arctic and the ponies meet the z warriors. In fact his ssj form is based off your ssj silver idea from the first story.

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Yeah like you could say that Super Saiyan Silver could be on par with Super Saiyan Blue.

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Maybe once we reach that point, though I do have a certain idea to have Arctic have a unique transformation that I suppose could possibly make him on par with super Saiyan blue

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👍I look forward to the hype you will bring to your fanfic.

I can already say this, Arctic will meet the Mane 6 for the next chapter. Great reference to Bridle Gossip. Quick question, what does Arctic look like in this new fanfic? I don't know if it's the same as the previous one.

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Thank you! As for looks, he’s a bit different. I’ll be showing Arctic’s updated design in the next chapter. I’ll also be posting my designs for Glacious, Tree Hugger, and Zecora. I’m also planning to update the mane six and the Princesses designs as well.

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I’m glad to hear you’re enjoying my story thus far :pinkiesmile::twilightsmile:

The beginning of the story seems to be going well for all the characters involved. I'm excited to see what happens in the next chapter. What do you think, Frieza?

"Hmph, it's passable, I suppose. But that monkey barely scratches the surface of his Saiyan heritage. When the time comes for me to face this Arctic, I'll teach him the true meaning of being a Saiyan and kill his loved ones in front of him. Just like I did to Goku."

If I may ask, how Spike would be handled in this fic?

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Spike in my fic will be somewhat like he is in the show. Though, later in the fic, I have plans for Spike to play a relatively big role once the dragon lands are introduced in my story. After that, I have plans for spike to become a bit more developed and more involved in things than he usually is in the show.

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So at the start he misses out on stuff the Mane 6 get to see/do together but less and less so later on?

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Roughly. I always felt Spike should be more present for things in the show. So in my fic, he’ll be more present. Get to see and participate in things he wasn’t really a part of. For the Dragon Lands, that’s when I have plans to have Spike start to grow a bit more. Have him play parts in major events or give him more to do in the events he was present for.

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Does he happen to get something so he isn't in the shadows of others too?
Since sadly in the show he kept playing secondfiddle alot to the Mane 6 in the show all because he's not one of the "chosen ones"

Managed to start reading this.
Hoping I can catch up soon.

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Something’s happen for him so he isn’t in the shadows of the girls. I have plans to kick off his own arc in my fic in the future.

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I hope you enjoy my story. Feel free to let me know what you think or have any kinds of suggestions

Was Spike has bad as the Mane 6 were in this situation or just silent?

Managed to catch up.


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Ok
(How was he in the original version of the fic?)

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In my original fic, he was a part of it and was going to play some major parts in it. Some ideas I had for Spike in the original will be in this fic. I don’t think I managed to do a anything with him in the original before remaking the story.

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In this Situation, Spike was mostly silent about things. He was scared much like the others, just didn’t go as far as them.

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Out here giving me ideas for the future of the story :pinkiesmile:

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How much did he missed out on beforehand?


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Ok.
A bit odd he seems scared just as them since he's different from the ponies too(and most likely faced discrimination due to being a dragon if those other 3 faced alot of bs from the ponies)

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He missed out on quite a bit. As for him being scared, that’s something that’ll be touched on in the next chapter. In regards of discrimination against Spike, I feel like any he gets, he’s unaware of, because Twilight would most likely protect him from it.

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Yes, I do. :twilightblush: (I got these last sentences... for now.)

"Hmm, I don't recall ever visiting Equus before, but if we do go Whis, we should definitely bring Goku and Vegeta along with us. After all, they may be interested in meeting fellow Saiyan."

"As you wish, Lord Beerus."

"Hmm, I do wonder if this Equus food will be able to match the savory taste of Earth's delicacies."

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Your welcome. I’m an Idea Forger. And if you ever need an editor to help make things even more exciting, I am one of many who can help. 👍

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Should ever I need it, I’ll be happy to have you as an editor for my story. :twilightsmile:

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Do you mean in the show? Or in my story thus far?

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In the original version of the story.

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I didn’t really do much of anything with Spike, science the story started up in about the very beginning of season 1. Just after Nightmare moon’s defeat. In this remake, Spike will be more present in the story. I have plans for him.

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In terms of power, for right now, I have plans to have Spike learn more about his Dragon magic.

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I’m not entirely sure it’s a thing in the show, but in my au, dragons do possess magic. They just don’t use it much, if at all. I also like the idea of Spike learning to use his dragon magic, giving rise to him being able to send and receive letters.

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