Since there seems to be a bit of confusion on the subject, the pony characters in this story are humanized with the different characteristics of their races, wings, horns, etc...
It's a time for celebration in the Crystal Empire. It's Princess Flurry Hearts ninth birthday. The princesses, the Elements and even everyone's favorite gem eating dragon have shown up to party! That is until an unexpected guest crashes the place three days before the party and Flurry becomes smitten with the odd child they found.
He's a young man around her age in an odd orange and blue outfit. The biggest difference with him is that he has a monkey's tail instead of wings or a horn and the tremendous power he exudes. His name is Son Gohan of the Saiyan race.
He's kind, courteous, strong and very generous, almost immediately befriending the young princess and her family with his attitude and stories. But, as it has been Gohan's entire life, this peace is not to last.
The people of Equestria are about to get a very rude awakening because, despite Gohan's kind hearted nature and will to protect his new friends, war seems to be working it's way towards them in the form of the Changeling Queen, Chrysalis and the mysterious and powerful General Diserex. The half-saiyan will need to fight like a bat out of Tartarus to protect this new world he's found himself in, but every choice has a consequence.
While not one for DBZ, I can't help but like what I've read so far and really can't wait for more. I also like the fact you chose Gohan for this over Goku/other saiyan as he is probably one of my top 3 characters.
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Mine as well, but honestly, I argued with myself on whether to make this about Goten instead, but after making the full outline, I just felt Gohan fit best.
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I never really got a good feel for Goten, feels like they were trying hard with him and trying to give trunks an okay partner/rival.
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It really is a shame that his character development was so quickly dropped. Think about, he IS the YOUNGEST Super Saiyan in the series, period. The depths of his potential power are unimaginable, and yet he's simply brushed aside once Gotenks becomes irrelevant. It sucks!
Oh, boy, I have a feeling that Gohan is really gonna be a NEEERRRDDD!!!! in the next chapter!
8468433
He's always a nerd, just now he's a nerd that kinda knows how to DOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDGGGGGE!
8468452
Priceless!
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Good old fashioned TFS jokes. I can't wait til episode 60 comes out next year.
The only gripe I have is Gohan cursing. It feels too forced and out of character for him to swear. Chi Chi would go upside his head if she heard him talk like that. I like the story so far, so best of luck with the rest.
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My response to that is those lines are references to GT and TFS
Would love to see a return of android 16 in this.
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I've been thinking about it, honestly, but I don't know how I would pull that one off.
so i just read the story have to say very impressed that your first story is 10,00 words and the next chapter 4 thousand and the story itself is pretty good
LOL. All I can picture for the next chapter isthe huge book Boner that Gohan is gonna have from seeing their library xD
Alternate universe tag, and humanized waring would have been nice.
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I have the human tag up.
8488884
The human tag doesn't mean that it is a humanized story. Just that a human, or humans, or involved somehow.
8489454
I'm afraid I don't see what you mean by the 'humanized' tag. There is no tag like that, just the human tag.
8494103
Wasn't saying to put a humanized tag. I know no such thing exist. I was saying to put a warning. As in at the end of the description say that this is a humanized ponies story.
The image you put up doesn't work.
You know, when you stop and analyze Dbz characters, you will find that most of them are very irresponsible and bloodthirsty.
Will gohan pick up his father's habit of losing his shirt in a fight?
8510137
Yeah. Kinda messed up. As kids we idolized them, but now that we're older we can see all those cringe worthy moments.
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Maybe.
Hey, I got my first dislike.
So they are humanized ponies... you mean Anthros?
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No, they're humans with their more discernible features. Horns, wings, etc.
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Maybe have him reprogramed by a 3rd party after being transported from Gohans world. Maybe discord wanted to have some fun. xD.
Are you still having romance in this story?
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I could see that and it's a good idea, but the problem is that this is set after the Cell Games, Gohan just doesn't remember anything. And yes, I will. Here and there.
8549556
I won't spoil any villains that may or may not show up, but I've been thinking of tossing a certain lavender haired half breed in there later on. I'm actually a bit surprised someone knew that that was Roshi's training for Goku and Krillin. Very few people even know about that, they just know Goku learned the Kamehameha from Roshi.
The super saiyan with more than two brain cells to rub together is sent to Equestria? Oh, Earth is so doomed.
I'll read this later, though.
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Lol, the Earth will learn to survive for a bit without it's savior.
8549556
NO he didn't need to transform. Obviously the manticore wasn't as strong as Diserex and so far, unless the princess's attacked him, he's the only being Gohan has decided to honor with a transformation, though that was cut short.
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It's a shame how few people remember the original Dragonball. It was actually better than the later series in a lot of ways.
But, in the immortal words of TeamFourStar:
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I watched it. Subtitled, even!
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8549640 I read the manga. All of it.
Huh. Treating it like an episodal epoch is a good touch, one I had yet to see. I like that approach.
I dislike the rush job of the shipping, as she is going way too fast. Even for someone her age.
Nonetheless, the action aspects and transitions from scene to scene is very Dragonball.
darn it. I keep finding good stories that I just get into then I reach the end of whats been written.
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so gohan can go ss2 he just doesnt remember how or if he can
8549640
if you do bring trunks into this maybe you could ship him with twilight i mean the brooding loner prince without a kingdom with a tragic past and the adorkable princess of friendship healing the wounds from his past with friendship .....and love
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8549865
When gohan does go super saiyan 2, could it be something epic like when goku went super saiyan against cooler for the first time?
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That's actually what the training is for story wise. To slow their relationship down a bit.
8550354
Exactly. He doesn't remember anything about the Cell Games, but he knows that it ended. He's more or less just told himself Goku beat Cell.
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Well, I'll be sure to keep you satisfied as best I can.
8550603
Hmm.
Not sure if sarcasm because missed sarcasm,
...or sarcasm because got sarcasm and is continuing sarcasm for fun's sake.
8551797
*cheeky smirking intensifies*
I really like the direction you're taking this. Flurry is an unknown, which opens up a whole bunch of different paths you can take with training her.
Hold on, hold on. I'm pretty sure Gohan lost his tail at the end of the Vegeta Saga.
I'm starting to think that Desirex is really Cell using a different name or something like that. How do you beat the tar outta someone who can feed offa rage!?