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Dungeons and Dragons

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A few new ponies in town come across the idea of playing Dungeons and Dragons. Being friends with everypony in town, Pinkie Pie greets them. When they find out they need more players, Pinkie, Rainbow Dash, and Twilight Sparkle come over and decide to play as well. Harmless, right? Seven friends playing D&D? That's where you're wrong.

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Cynewulf

Cynewulf #1 · Oct 8th, 2012 · · ·

Wandered by while I work on a fic in another tab. :P

There's some struggling with tenses and there's some more glaring mechanical mistakes. But it's not awful. You've definitely got the ability to improve and I think with a good pre-reader you can do some cool stuff, bro. Good luck with your story!

(Also, learn how to use that enter key and how paragraphs should be formatted!)

WillowmistPegasus