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Muffinlover4


I love writing short stories, and this seems like just the place to receive feedback on my writing :D

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This story follows our crew in the midst of a zombie outbreak. They must survive and make it Los Angeles to secure themselves in the last safe house. Friendships will be tested, and lives will be at stake. All the while, some mysterious force is at work and cannot be explained. Will the mane six along with Spike make it to L.A. safely, or will they be doomed to the fate of the undead?

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I think you mean Las Pegasus.

1401043 Haha, I was trying to humanize most parts of the story. But that would work, huh? :rainbowlaugh:

1401161 Thanks! I was afraid to post on here because I'm newer to writing fiction for enjoyment. I'm planning on writing quite a bit more since I'm getting some positive feedback :) :pinkiehappy:

1401996 Yeah, that's what it's generally called, for example, Manehattan, etc.

because your username is muffinlover
:duck:

Is this it or is there MOAR!!? :rainbowhuh:

1434650 There is more underway. :twilightsmile: Do you wish to have more? :pinkiehappy:

1437757 Yes indeed. :twilightsmile: It should be out in just a little. :pinkiehappy:

Hmmm that reminds me of a game
Ever heard of Metro 2033? it's a game about post-nuclear apocalypse in Moscow
There's these mutants that throw you into a kind of like dream state and they make you vision things from pre-Apocalyptic Moscow to some wierd dream demention it's freaking strange

Dude silly question but how do you make stories?

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