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The Diplomat

The Diplomat #1 · Oct 8th, 2012 · · ·

Huh. Not bad

EXOLIEF

EXOLIEF #2 · Oct 8th, 2012 · · ·

Ehh, the writing was decent. I just wish there was a little more to it. Still, it did what it needed to do, even if it was a little unsatisfactory

RitchieG74

RitchieG74 #3 · Oct 8th, 2012 · · ·

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Thanks mate, this was my first clopfic, and just wrote it as it came to me, in about an hour and a half. This was kinda like testing the waters for me, just to see if I could write something like this. Thanks for the feedback

EXOLIEF

EXOLIEF #4 · Oct 8th, 2012 · · ·

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Oh hey, no problem. I did the exact same thing a while back. My friends encouraged me to get better and put it on the internet though. Curse them