Starlight Glimmer abandoned her plan to travel back in time when Prince Dusk Shine showed her that Equestria would be destroyed if she continued to alter the past, so she pretended to reform, although her new friends do not really trust her.
However, Starlight is secretly planning revenge without destroying Equestria in the process, this time without friendship and without the Mane 6 standing in her way, or so she wants to believe, as she has begun to feel more than just sympathy towards the prince of friendship, which will make his new revenge plans difficult.
Chapters (2)
You have no idea how long I waited for a Dusk x Starlight fanfic! It’s a rare ship from what I looked in the internet so far. I had that concept in my head for at least a month now, and this is pretty good so far. Keep up the great work!
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I was also looking for fics or images for a year, but I couldn't wait forever, hahaha.
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Could use cleaner punctuation and better grammar, since you refered to Starlight as both male and female in a few chapters; but otherwise it's a great first chapter.
Nice story so far, I hope you will write more of it.
Of all the Dusk Shine ships, this is one of the most unusual and the truth is that it is a pleasure to see. Well, it remains to be seen what the future holds for this fic.
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Yes... it's something I've tried to solve, I guess it's my inexperience in doing translations
One piece of advice: put a cover on it, it could attract more readers.