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ahahahahaha! I haven't even read this, but that description is killing me
“I hope they’re not fucking.” Twilight muttered to herself. [I am now on the floor laughing uncontrollably]
HAH
ADHAAHHAHAHA ROFLMFAO THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL
The ending... SO GOOD!!! Simply amazing~
Bwuahahahahahaha! I don't read clopfics because...ew.
But I felt this was gonna be really funny and...I WAS RIGHT. that ending was to buckin' funny
AHAHAHAHAHA!!!
OMC (Oh My Celestia) THAT WAS SO FUNNY!
The Ending got to me to bad
Twilight, what were you doing?” Spike almost vomited from the site.
“Just…having a lazy day.” She smiled at them.
“Are those my dildos?” Rarity asked in surprise.
“No.”
oh my god -.- curiosity got the best of me..
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH OH CELESTIA THAT IS HILARIOUS
I have the weirdest boner right now...
What in celestia did i just read?
I don't know what I just read but I'm laughing so you know it must have been good.
This story is, without a doubt, ne of the funniest things I have ever read.
“Are those my dildos?” Rarity asked in surprise.
“No.”
Not gonna lie. thats the hardest ive laughed in a week.
it was finally made.....and it was PERFECT!!!!
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You need to try harder. Yes, I realize this is satire, but jokes alone do not make for a good comedic fic. In this particular case, you need to work on building up the scene and having everyone stay in character. Think about it. Would Twilight pick up a book and start jacking off to it in the middle of nowhere? Would Rarity be, in her words, so uncouth to actually have a room full of dildos? And would Twi think so lowly of her friend? Didn't think so.
Thinking inside the chimney still requires you to have a grasp of reality and believability.
WTFWT! i.... dose not compute.... error.... i need to sit down.. this is ju... just, i cannot describe it that is how shocked i am..
What did I just read?
Geez, my internet goes down for one night and when I wake up I get this.
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Thank you for giving me criticism, It is what I thrive on. The story is in fact a satire, and because of it I don't try to grasp the believability too much. Twilight's character is stretched ever so slightly in my opinion. Twilight's thoughts about Rarity isn't quite opinion. To just 'guess' about Rarity having a lot of dildo's is highly unlikely, therefore I do believe it's safe to say she had some sort of prior knowledge about Rarity being A TOTAL BUCKING SLUT FFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
In all seriousness though, they stay in character enough for the sake of a satire, in my opinion, but I thank you for giving me yours and I know where you're coming from with it.
I'll try my hand at another and keep your comments in mind.
i feel my brains cels getting less and less... almost .... aalllmooost... gone.... *uncontroleble grin
*
oooooooooooookay... apple.mov
fybertech.com/4get/13085199618437.png I have the weirdest boner right now.
>MFW I read this
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I keep on getting notifications that my story is being tracked, yet that rating number never moves...
Gotta watch for them apples. Don't know how to take no for an answer.
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They're a crazy bunch.
What did I just read....
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A lot of things.
And more.
it would have been better if luna or twilight walked in on her
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I was thinking about Luna, but I have plans for where she was at this time...
Twilight was busy as explained in the story, so that wouldn't have worked.
"She decided that this was the best and worst part of her life so far. So much pleasure, yet so much rape."
"Macintosh didn’t even bother to check up on her. He only shook his head and walked away."
lolollolloloololol I love all of these! they are so lol
Just got banned off of Ponychan for a couple of days, so I'll be uploading these twice as fast, seeing as I can't derail threads with Spiderman all day anymore... Just writing.
“Fuck.” Celestia threw the letter down.
Winning.
And I can't wait to see what Luna is up too!
:shiftyeyes: 
Dem personallities
I truly think I should slam my fce on my desk until i can recognise my face in it.
But somehow I want to read more.
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Thanks! And I'm sorry about reviewing your story. I've been very busy writing this and another story. 5 rewrites so far of the first chapter of my story (which I haven't uploaded yet) and it's driving me crazy how I can't get it right! I promise I'll get to you by tomorrow morning!
i have a feeling everpony's gonna find out anyway....
Please. Don't do Fluttershy x Angel or Rainbow Dash x Clouds.
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I'm doing inanimate objects, so no animals will be doing Fluttershy. I haven't decided on RD yet.
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Then please don't use a carrot.
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Good man for using Spiderman.
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Gotto agree on the Rarity #1 option point.
No matter that Twilight would not trade off an inch* of 'practical' for 'style/glamour' when it comes to anything that practical purpose-
Be it a dress or a dildo.
But nopony can argue the following:
-If Rarity has even one, then she sure as hay has a whole collection.
*pun not originally intended but found funny once discovered
you know, just for the sake of completeness...
I would have trusted her to keep a better eye on the date of their return and privacy of the location though (as in- lock the door! Well, Spike would have a key. Lock magically? Would likely break along with the Animation spell. Hmm. Nevermind..)
Oh, yes! And I would like to add to the chorus of 'and the ending is just priceless!'
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I expect great things from you, MrMusicalPony... Great things indeed...
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"Applejack finally flung herself out of the apples, escaping the rapid gangbang. She collapsed from exhaustion, her pussy squirting out juices in one last orgasm, which also pushed out an apple."
You wrote this.
You wrote this, then put it on the Internet.
THIS PARAGRAPH NOW EXISTS ON THE INTERNET.
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE??!!
What does Soarin' get up to with that pie, I wonder...
WINK WINK NUDGE NUDGE
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Have you ever just listened to him eat the pie? Yeah. I went there.
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Rainbow Dash x Clouds already exists.
You're welcome.
It disturbs me that I can totally see the Element of Generosity giving her younger sister all those dildos.