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This story is a sequel to Maledict


Side story to Maledict

With Celestia off on her journey to the Arcturian Order, Luna is invited to the city of Aquila by Queen Vivienne Discret. With the possibility of obtaining support from Aquileia, the princess brings Flurry Heart and Spike to the rapidly modernizing city, where new blends with old. With the help of the queen, Princess Luna hopes to learn the ways of waging war in a modern world, to one day reclaim Equestria from her enemies.

Set in the Equestria at War universe, a mod for the grand strategy game Hearts of Iron IV

Shoutout to Reviewfilly for his help with proofreading! I feel like this story would be lesser without his help.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 14 )

Downloaded. Gonna read this while I am working at the hospital.

GIVE ME BIRB
CRUSH YOUR NEMESIS

tiberius bros we never left

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I hope you enjoy the first chapter!
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SOON
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Tiberius for LIFE

I enjoyed the first chapter.

"I don't want to go!" Flurry cried behind her door.
Luna sat outside of her niece's room as the younger alicorn threw her tantrum. She heard stomps and crying along with the crashing and banging of things being pulled down and thrown around. A glance at Spike's worried expression finally strengthened her resolve to make a move. "Go get some ice cream," she whispered to him.

*gasps*

They ate in comfortable silence until Spike let out a belch which caused Flurry to burst into giggles and Luna cracked a grin. Vivienne raised a brow, and then her glass of juice.
“There are many ways to show approval of a meal, sometimes the simplest ones are the best,” the Queen said with a smile.

She does have a point there.

"Spike, you never had a formal education, and so Queen Vivienne is graciously providing the both of you this opportunity."
"Please princess, living with Twilight was like being at school 24/7!"

I was about to say the same.

Luna carefully stepped up to the set up table as she gave a nod to the Queen. She couldn’t remember the last time she was lectured, but if the Queen was anything like Star Swirl, she was about to face a dreadful afternoon after such a wondrous breakfast.

Maybe. But she will end up wiser. Or at least slightly more experienced.

two bad bitches, both alike in pride and dignity, having a chat. love it

So this is the secret spouse option that we never going to see

its always nice to see anecdotes of luna's childhood, and seeing luna and spike try to parent flurry in their own way is very sweet to see! they're making the most of an objectively shitty situation and they seem to be doing their best to not leave her behind in what must be one of the worst periods in her life thus far :)

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I do try my best! Anecdotes of the Sisters' history is always easy to do since we don't really know much about it, and I'm glad you're enjoying how Spike and Luna try to help Flurry.

it's really cute to see luna taking care of flurry :) brings a tear to my eye. it's also funny that luna is 'forcing' vivienne to reconcile with her dysfunctional family

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Michel is certainly dysfunctional in his own special way, I'm glad that you've been enjoying the story thus far!

A little Christmas gift for everyone! I'll be taking a wee break from weekly uploads for the holidays and whatnot and hope you all have a happy new year!

Thank you!
I hope you have a great time, too!


Celestia's "troubles" are the events of your other story Maledict, correct?
Especially her first battle with Rosa Maledicta?

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They are, but this chapter happens concurrently with Celestia and the Patient!

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