What was supposed to be a normal walk through the forest turns ugly when Zipp and Pipp get into a heated argument when the former accidentally breaks her sister’s phone after tripping over a tree root. Zipp, consumed by rage hurts her own sister in the process and runs away in both shame and guilt, but her situation becomes dire when she is gravely wounded due to serious circumstances and is trapped inside a cavern.
With no way out and bleeding heavily Zipp reflects back on her 19 years of living before she passes on to the afterlife.
Chapters (2)
Okay. Hopefully this gets completed because I’m definitely curious as to how Zipp will get out of this, if at all, and how her friends and family will react to her current condition
Pipp has no right to be a jerk to her sister like that; Zipp didn't mean to break her phone (it was an accident), and Pipp just overreacted like a whiny brat. Zipp had every right to say those things about her sister and I don't blame Zipp for hurting her sister physically like that. I hope Zipp makes it out alive, and I predict that in the next chapter, Sunny, Izzy, Hitch, and Misty (if she appears) will call Pipp out on her selfishness and go to find Zipp. Maybe to rub more salt in the wound, Posey (of all ponies) shows up and says that even she would never hurt a family member like that.
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Though the part where she is being chased by a jaguar and then impaled by a stalagmite is certainly harrowing.
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Yep. I hope Pipp gets her karma. She's becoming my least favorite out of the main 5 (mainly due to how she's been acting in the more recent IDW comics).
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Well it’s your opinion.
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I think seeing her sister in such a state will be enough of a wake up call
great story mate
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Thank you! I am working hard on this one.
Relieved to see this wasn’t just one chapter and abandoned.
Man, the emotions are really strong during this. Hopefully things will get better next chapter, but somehow I doubt it
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
Interesting so far. There's a few grammar mistakes, and the pacing's a little fast for my personal taste, but I'll stick around and see where this goes. I like a good dark and dramatic story every so often. :)
Good story
Poor Zipp
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Thank you, and yeah sorry for having to put Zipp through the ringer. You should read the next chapter too. It deals with some heavy emotions from her sister and mother.
NO ZIPP DON'T DIEeEEeeEEE~
It was special! I mean like, you ever heard of a phone lasting over 10 years these days...?
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Yeah, and sorry for having your sister slap you in the face in this story even if it was a lapse of judgment on her part.
You haven't abandoned this story, have you?
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No I haven’t. I’m just taking a break from writing in two consecutive days (different story). I will get back to this I promise, I just want to put some focus on my newest story for a bit.