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Twilights POV
…What?
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What would be the problem?
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Is this a flashback or...? Like is this Twilight? Somepony like Twilight? Is the soldier an unreliable narrator?
Or did the the one Stallion just come down from space in front of somepony, and that pony just said 'your my guardian now'?
Edit: Clarified
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The guard is still falling down from space. This is a flashback from Twilight, because she was talking to the guard in his head in the prior chapter.
Is she real? Is the guard real? Is any of this real?
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Alright. That makes sense, I guess.
I don't know why, but this chapter reminded me of this quote.
“There’s always something to look at if you open your eyes!” The Fifth Doctor
Also great chapter as always.
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Thanks ^^'
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That is fair. I will try to summarise this in a more cohesive order.
Prologue: It is an introduction to two characters. One is Twilight Sparkle, and the other is her Guard (Protector), and the protector is forewarning the reader of what she is capable of. Yet he also asks the reader if they would believe the tale being told to be true.
Chapter 1: This was basically a fluff chapter. It was to indicate that the spire was indeed real because it used the idea that, children's eyes always tell the truth.
Chapter 1.5: It was confirmed that the spire was indeed real from the two foals in Chapter 1. The guard then proceeded to give more details on how the pony he guards is quite powerful. He then asks the reader if they would prepare her to return to their world if she were to be woken up.
Chapter 1.9: This is just the guard's ramblings on how he wants Twilight to be awake and in his life again.
Chapter 2: This is a recounting of the life the guard had, prior to being entombed with her in the spire as he dreams. Twilight wakes him up and requests him to free her from her prison, nothing physically and spiritually. (The spiritual is implied)
Chapter 2.5: This is Twilight recounting some memories, prior to being locked away.
Chapter 3: This is the set of events that gives more context to Chapter 2.5.
Just keep in mind. I am trying to give a more cohesive version of a fever dream I had a couple of years back. I do not blame you for not being able to understand the story. I do apologise for that.
I hope this gives you a much easier way to understand things or gives you an underlying idea. My main attempt here is for everyone to have their own way of figuring out if this is real or not.
Copyright Twilight's Soul Floats Ever Deeper Into Space
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Why?
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Don’t you hate it when your questions don’t get a response?
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it is quite dejecting. ^^'
11706789
That user got permanently banned from the site. No wonder they never responded.
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Well then. I guess we will never know what they would of said ^^'
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They never once said a coherent thing on this site though. Just rambling, incoherent nonsense. So you would've probably never got anything anyway.
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Ah, well. Thank you for the update.
Are any of your other stories based off of dreams you’ve had? This includes your non-My Little Pony characters.
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I think it was bot. Accitental non-inanity was the owner using wrong account
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Only this one was based on a fever dream I had. I am, however, trying to expand upon it.
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Sorry, I forgot to answer the other portion of your question. I've added these non-mlp Characters to replay some of the events I had in the dream. So, whilst I jot down my fever dream, I am also expanding it.
Are the six ponies, the guards and he whom I don't think you have spoken a name for, like the main six? That is the feeling I get.
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The five guards are just stepping stones for Twilight to use. And the lavender guard is her protector.
Banger start to a story, lov it
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Why thank you ^^
Twilight the looming death totem, may Faust have mercy on us all once she awakens.
This really does feel like a fever dream, a beautiful yet haunting one at that.
But, but, why is twilight evil?
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Because it's just that good of a story ^^
Ohh... I see what's happening...
Is this the Equestrian Bible, or the Neon Genesis Equinegelion
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An excellent Question. ^^'
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Hehehe.
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Why thank you, I do appreciate it.
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hehehe
11854493
Why thank you, you are too kind. ^^
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hehehehe