Cozy Glow has been banished to the human realm following her criminal actions in Equestria, and now finds herself trying to survive in a world she knows nothing about. Luckily, or perhaps unluckily, for her, she's not alone. She is under the watchful care of one Sunset Shimmer, who agreed to keep an eye on her per request from Princess Twilight Sparkle. Cozy is not happy with her entire situation, and rebels at every turn. Her new "gaurdian" tries to be patient and understanding, but after an incident that affects the entirety of Canterlot High, Sunset finally decides to take matters into her own hands to bring her charge down a notch and teach a valuable lesson that won't be so easy to forget..and in the process, learn more about Cozy than anyone else had ever thought to learn.
Note: This story does contain disciplinary spanking of a minor by an older teenager in a later chapter. If you don't like that kind of thing, don't read.
The spanking chapter is the longest one? Very suspicious.
In many places, what Sunset did in this chapter is actually illegal.
I don’t understand why, I was spanked as a child and I turned out fine but I get that times have changed.
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Also some studies have shown that in real life spanking only makes sneaky children more sneaky and violent children more violent.
Studies that have been done on children who are like Cozy (or worse) in real life show that positive reinforcement is more effective than spanking. Children like this will never be perfectly behaved (or even close to it) but in cases like this the most realistic goal is to avoid incarceration and hold down some type of job.
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He said on a My Little Pony fanfiction site
To be honest, I'm not sure implications of spanking are as important in this fic as a careful plot vs. fetish balance.
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Admittedly i got a little out of hand in writing that chapter xD But by the time i realized it I more or less just said "The heck with it."
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I'm aware its probably illegal in some places in the real world. But this is purely a work of fiction. So I'm not too worried about it.
This was a good little story, and I enjoyed it. But I’m with Sunset; what has Cozy done this time?!
All in all, it's a pretty decent story. I was just wondering if there will be a sequel or somewhat of a continuation.
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I hadn't definitely planned on it, but its a possibility.
Oh, this is good.
Really enjoyed this, I could see a few sequels from this. Cozy getting in trouble with the cmc, getting in trouble from fighting with the cmc, cozy disrupting a date that sunset is on because she is jealous?possibilities are endless. And yeah, Sunset is really the perfect person to look after cozy. They have done similar mad schemes, both had stints thinking the world is out to get them, that you need power and cruelty to protect yourself.
All in all, really liked this, fan of your work, and hope you have more in coming.
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Thank you! And yes, I do have other stories coming XD