The basis for a new AU world involving a world where Twilight was the creator of the equestrian species in a completely new direction. A sci-fi story in the guise of medieval fantasy and vice versa. Follow the life and adventures of a fantasy species that presents a unique take on things while still being digestible for the fans that enjoy explosions, powers, magic and technology.
Read about the 4th dimensional hivemind characters who can all shapeshift and tap into each other's consciousness, move at lightning speeds, mind control opponents through singing, and glow in the dark.
The only way to portray accurately the felquines living in the Bootes Void in a multidimensional 2-cored planet with a ring of planets surrounding it which has developed a culture and language distinct from any in the milky way, is through two separate genres, which are SoL and Adventure, respectively.
Read about the deep, intricate plots involving Twilight talking to infinite clones of herself, genociding entire species while trying to assimilate them into her hivemind, imprisoning her worst enemies in a matrix Hell and kicking the Emperor of Mankind in his glorious jaw because he wants to steal her power.
Read about Twilight's unique culture, religion, traditions, poems, anthems, language, military, singing, style of life, and the many facets of her felquine species.
The, first chapter of a mixture of IC, OOC and fiction... is very weird and heavy read.
[Edit] this "story" is a utter mess and need a complete and utter rewrite to be even to be barely readable
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Thought sometimes it's better to simply show than infodump/tell
it's ass
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Oh you actually read it? as opposed to downvoting because you saw an ad? in that case mind telling me what did you read in the fic and telling me exactly how ass it is ? is it a round ass, a pear ass, a heart-shaped ass?
Is this satire?
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Dude, it is all over the place and is a awful exposition dump.
It is pretty bad.
Imagine being such a notorious shitposter that you buy an ad on a Malaysian Crab Taming forum because you probably have a 2-year vacation.
Amazing story the ad was cool too
I have a tooth infection right now
I feel bad now for removing @simple-as and @Lee Goldson's comments for referencing the fact this fanfic was posted on 4chan since it was already getting a lot of dislikes, so people won't read it regardless of the content, not like the content isn't experimental to begin with. Also 4chan ads are completely useless. 95639 impressions for 437 clicks of which I think only 37 are non bots and only 12 users or so engaged with it.
For those who might be discouraged even scared of voicing their critiques, rants, etc. because I might haha report their accounts or anything and they really need to keep track of those favourites list (a user on 4chan said this), feel at ease that I won't. I'm more of in a state of detached and attached with my wishlist fanfic, I don't get attached to my fanfics in a conventional way. I'm rather more interested to see if anyone has everything to say I already know about it or something new to say.
I welcome anyone to write their critiques, rants, reviews, etc. since I know every single little thing you could possibly have to say about the fic, especially on the negative side. I actually have a mental checklist which I'll verify to see if you managed to check everything off the list.
If you have something new to say, a new perspective, something I missed or wouldn't have thought of in a trillion years then congratulations to you, you're an actual critic and not one of those journalists who can't figure out the crouch button.
LOL Dat 4chan ad tho. So true
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Grown-ass men watching Hasbro's toy commercial titled "My Little Pony" and grown-ass men writing fanfiction about its world and characters. No I'd say we have went far beyond satire and evolved it into a fine silvery paste that cannot possibly in its wildest imagination ever make a choice between black or white.