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Just falling through this tempest called life

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As a guard prepares for his duties, his son asks him why he is a guard, prompting the stallion to make the question a teachable moment.

I wrote this in celebration of U.S. Mermorial Day.

Rated Teen because of some sensitive topics being discussed.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

You're welcome, but you forgot to correct a couple of errors I indicated

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My computer must've screwed up saving things again. I'll have to pull up your revised draft and recorrect them.

This was beautiful.

This was pretty good. A nice, simple story with lots of heart. A bit straightforward, but not all stories need to be complex. Good job on this!

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