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Burningbloom78


The one with a penchant for writing.

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Something bad happened. A pony was slain, by a fool. He never once questioned his loyalty aloud, only in his troubled mind. The aftermath of that death caused him to escape the righteous fury of the royal guards, taking refuge near a lake on the edge of Equestrian territory.

There he sits and ponders his actions and wonders what should become of him. Whilst attempting to come to terms with what had happened, he is found and confronted by Princess Celestia.

He expected a reckoning for his disloyalty, but he got something else entirely. Maybe this is the right choice.

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I think you should add suicide/self harm tags

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I was thinking about that, and I think I will.

"What can we do?" she had asked him. "If you won't be welcome, then perhaps you can just stay here where no pony but myself knows. I don't you to leave or...end your life. I want you to stay with me as you've always had. I could sneak away and visit you every day. I can transform your identity with my magic; I can give you a name, a new look, a new everything. Doesn't that sound perfect?"

Oops, looks like something else got dropped too! :rainbowkiss:

"I felt him wriggling out of my grip and pressed onto him harder, insisting he gave up his pointless struggle, but he didn't listen and in a desperate bid to escape, he pulled out a knife that was concealed in his ragged attire when he managed to wrench out a hoof. He put the knife in his mouth and craned his neck toward me in an attempt to cut my throat and escape. I could see the fear and desperation in his eyes as he swiped and slashed feebly at me, each attack narrowly missing my throat, but he came closer to killing with each strike.

That level of desperation? In Canterlot?!? Oh Zain you fool, now she'll be too shook to investigate! :pinkiegasp:
Sounds like somepony was engaged in blackmail! Possibly a noble had sway over him for a bad loan?
The old "pay us back or we break your kneecaps and leave a horseponyhead in your bed?":rainbowderp:
Some rotten scoundrel got two good ponies killed, and is now getting away with it!:twilightangry2:

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