Twilight Sparkle, renowned scholar, The Great Purple Magus, Priced Student of Celestia Sol Invicta, has faced many struggles through her life.
Facing against Mad God from Tartarus, Hostile Armies, Mad Kings and Queens, Spirits of Ancient times, but the biggest one of her life was her own social awkwardness, rendering her as an asocial madmare for a good part of her life, that was until the fateful day when her beloved teacher sent her to a little town in the outskirts of Canterlot, where she met her 5 new friends one faitful day.
But what if this time Twilight hadn't been so Socially Awkward?
What if instead she heard that little voice in her head more? you know, the one that tell's you
"Hey, they're hot, go and talk to them"
That one voice that told you, you have a type.
Alright this sounds Fun let's see where you take this
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oh you're in for a ride
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Looking forward to it
The doctor the day Twilight was born: Congratulations! It's a bard!
So is this gonna be a thing just between Twilight and NMM/Luna? Or is she gonna be collecting villians for her harem like a dragon hoarding gems? Cuz I'm down either way.
Also, another skit i just came up with:
Celestia: Twilight, you know, in the years i've come to know you, you've become something of a daughter to me.
Twilight: W-wow! R-really? I-i-i didn't realis-
Celestia: That being said!
Twilight: eep!
Daybreaker: If you EVER break my sister's heart, there will be no force in all of Equestria that will save you from me! Understood?
Twilight: Y-yes Princess Celestia.
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YESSSSS, YOU GET IT!
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thats a fun idea, i may or may not consider it for future projects.
as for the Twilight Harem, just wait and see, the next chapter will answer it
what a wild Ride that was (in a Good way)
This was quite a fun chapter!
I liked how you wrote Discord's shenanigans, and the way that Twilight was curious about the chaos magic fits well with her more scientific nature, since science isn't about adhering strictly to preconcieved notions, but instead searching for the best explanations for things, no matter how impossible they may be!
And Twilight's interactions with Discord, Derpy, and the bunny were quite adorable!
Only thing this chapter lacks is proper spellchecking, since I noticed quite a few mispelled words, but other than that, I loved it!
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im glad you are liking it so far, as i said, i wasn't so sure.
Lets see how the next one turns out.
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im glad you liked, i still feel this is maybe too OOC at times, but still im glad you liked how i wrote the characters.
I will do a spellcheck soon, i often re-read my works as i write too correct some, but there are always details here and there.
thanks again for the kind words
Great premise, but PLEASE get yourself an editor.
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will try, will try