To the younger ponies, fighting as Legionnaire of the Republic against the Solar Empire's Tyranny is dream come true. But to those who have already faced the Empire's wrath over and over again in the name of freedom, the illusion of any sort of glory disappears once the bullets start flying overhead.
When a stallion faces death, he should strive to clear his conscience of guilt and regret. For one particular stallion in the Lunar Republic Legion, it comes in the form of a letter.
-Cover Paraderpy
Inspired by Paraderpy's "Fillysburg"
Chapters (1)
Well, looks like I've finally found the courage to post this.
This is my first time posting, so forgive me if the formatting is a bit off, I still haven't gotten the handle on that. And some constructive criticism is much appreciated, I know from experience that self-editing isn't perfect.
The first ever fanfic that I've actually finished writing, this was supposed to be part of a larger story, it's inspired by Paraderpy's Equestrian Civil War artwork and is based on the conflict between the Lunar Republic and the Solar Empire. Yeah, these kinds of stories are becoming kinda cliched, but this one just wont stay out of my head. I hope you enjoy
First of all interesting concept, there aren't much "solar empire" "Luna republic" going on. I am writing a fic myself, that have something to do with it. the problem is that there is so much world construction in it, that I think it is necessary to tell another story, to tell just how to get to that one. Nice initiative though.
Oh and>>1330344. Stop being a douche, this isn't a place for commercials.
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yeah, admittedly, this was originally going to be part of a larger story, but I've been having difficulties on its...presentation.
I give this a solid three out of five. Random emoticons my messed up grading system mark this as would read again, but not a favorite.
