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Part of my AU.

Luna visits an old castle out in the far east of Equestria, only to discover a systemic issue that had been concealed from her for…years. Batponies are a growing species, and despite lack of attacks from them, ponies seem to take a xenophobic stance towards them due to their differences.

Luna and Fluttershy want to change that and let batponies live in peace.

TW.

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What AU? Your other stories seem unrelated.

:rainbowderp:

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the related stories are all grouped in the shelf called ‘The Grand AU’!

Thanks. I found it. I'd suggest posting a link if you can

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what was the deal with twilight being under an influence

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to be explained in a fic due next week/week after.

Bad. Real bad.

Writing is disjointed, the characters are just speakers for bad lines, and there is no real plot. To me it seems you were more interested in creating a piece of juvenile propaganda than an actual story with a point.

A concept lime that deserves a good tale. Not this junk.

“Keep a hoof on that. Better with you than Twilight.” That was the mare she was the most furious with, besides Celestia for keeping her in the dark assumedly. How could Twilight turn to be such a…bigot?

No offense but Well I mean she is your sisters student.

That was one reason Luna liked Chrysalis so much…she wasted no time, and was good at getting answers. To the point and clever about it. She was also quite cute…

My shipping senses are tingling.

The yellow unicorn mumbled a chant, pushing a hoof to Twilight’s horn, the magical glow suddenly vanishing. In response, Twilight glared, grabbing a knife from her own bag. “Fluttershy. Get. Away. From. The. Bat.”

Oh shit she’s got a knife!

*rise .45 colt up*

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=kMUVCiN0C2I

‘Dear diary, Its been five years. The Elements of Harmony split up and don’t see each other anymore. Twilight was under some sort of influence…she publicly apologized and basically made it water under the bridge. In a good way. Batponies are finally accepted. But the undertones of society still affect us. We can’t get good jobs and when we do, its less pay. My plan will finish in a few months. Should make things more equal. Starlight would like that. Goodnight diary, I’m happy tonight. I helped make a difference. I’ll be helping to finish the process. Luna give me good dreams tonight.’

Is their a sequel in the make for that perhaps?

And huh fluttershy as a unicorn… wait then who is the Pegasus to replace fluttershy?

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hi!
the next fic i release will go into that a bit more! It is its own fic, but helps to explain some things in this one, including the part you quoted.
basically everything released on this account unless specified otherwise(and excluding the first fic posted here) is interconnected.

As for the pegasus thing…later fic!

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maaaaaayyyybe

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