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Oh a loyalist story? I love it. MOAR!
Oh no? Don't tell me that his infiltration team has betray him as well. Since you literally said that he is the last loyalist?
Also;
Who the heck is this guy?
I love this so far had my own idea for the last loyal changelings in a crossover story but i'm way behind on the show having not watched it since end of season 5. Hope to see this updated more and hopefully regularly might become one of my fav fimfic
Thy hath us intrigued. I don't think I've read a story like this before except for a oneshot, so this will be a new experience.
Yes! Get to her before those hypocrites! Go on soldier!
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From the description, I'd say Soar'n in his wonderbolt uniform.
MOre dude. And yeah too soon... i like it more.
Welp, his own infiltration team has betrayed him as well! That sucks. ( In his eyes. )
You wouldn't say that when you too are also changed yourself, Pharynx. Later on that is.
The heck just happened!? Did he have a premonition of the future!?
Is that a reference of the Super Crown? That turns Bowser into Bowsette.

Of course, he is already converted.
Glad to see that the Buffalo's and Diamond Dogs are relevant again.
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it is somehow strange to watch how a character who, in theory, should not trust everyone except representatives of his own species, without a shadow of a doubt, tells his story of the first zebra he met, which he had never seen before. He could pretend to be anyone and tell a lie based on the truth, but for some reason he decides to open up to someone who, in theory, could be a potential enemy.
not worth it. This may not be true, but I'm pretty sure there are those among the readers who are here solely for the sake of it.
Great story! Hoping for a sequel that is longer.
So... This isn't about a changeling who refused to change because he enjoyed taking love by force?
Very nice... very very nice.
Of course, in this version of events, Chrysalis builds a new hive and does not start talking to the trees, but Discord's plan (fake Grogar) has not gone away. How will he act now? just kidnap Chrysalis or take her new hive (family) with her?
In doubt simply call them Changedlings.
Sounds like there are several other 'lings around.
Good luck finding them though.
I wonder whether she would be honored, annoyed or amused by his thoughts.
Would that really be a curse? Or more of an reward?
Whatever the case, I'm sure she won't be happy.
If you would talk to the ponies instead of kidnapping them you might learn even more...
That rainbow pony will be so angry... Which I'm sure would only motivate hin further to take this one in particular.
(G5-Spoiler) Opaline: "We'll see..."
I thought there was a ridiculous long time skip, but it was actually just a dream.
Better make sure this dream stays a dream.
Maybe put on a disguise?
You better hope whoever lives here is afraid of you. Otherwise he might attack instead of flee.
Task failed successfully.
He had been found (failing his mission), bat at the same time accomplished his goal (finishing his mission).
Chrysalis: "To be fair, neither of you actually contributed anything towards your victory. Hay, even Luna did more than both of you combined."
Considering it had only been nine days this says a lot.
"Maybe we should freely share our love?"
And then both of them reformed. The End.
"Make me your Swarmleader! I mean I'm the most capable and strongest subject you have."
*reads what he actually wished for*
...I guess that works, too.
Good soldier!
This will surely give him bragging rights once everything returned to normal.
Let me guess: It was made with love?
It's also the best way to start a new hive!
They're both very proud to hit this specific number, aren't they?
To be fair, the same would have happened to you.
Interesting, that's the opposite of what I would have expected.
But hey, headcanon is headcanon. Especially since Hasbro never touched this subject.
Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.
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I'm glad you liked it.