Regardless of who you were yesterday and are today. You are still valuable. Formerly "ThisHidingPony"
First was the darkness. A canvas that stretched out as far as the eyes can see. Then there was brightness. Shapes and textures were brought to light from the once desolate portrait. Then a beam pierces through a prism, paving way for color to spread. Finally, life will be brought to the plane.
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Going to attempt to write something new. Something to break off a writer's block.
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Pretty good, very dreamy and minimalistic, can't wait to see where the story goes!
I can tell you've put a lot of thought into this story, and I can respect that, but I can't say I've enjoyed this up to this point. Your premise is just so bizarre and out-there that it's hard to get engaged in, and your execution doesn't really help that. This has hardly even been a My Little Pony story, short of the characters being ponies. Maybe this gets better further on, but I just don't have any motivation to continue reading.
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I've been thinking of branching out lately. Some thing and someplace non-pony-ish. Yet, I have some ideas I want to finish before I move forward, you know?