I've learned from Wendigo. Suggestive images, not directly NSFW ones. Also, just a note about Malvi, Jersey, Blue, and Lulu. I noticed some people getting confused by the names. Those are all related to cow breeds that, in some way or another, correlate with the characters in question. And, shoutouts to everyone who predicted a sex-scene coming up in this chapter + apologies to everyone who didn't. I usually take a "bit" longer for my romance plots, but kind of wanted one here for narrative purposes and to avoid all that overplayed HiE sex drama. This is an adventure story.
I was not anticipating such a lustful~ chapter, I actually thought this was the beginning of him being the ruler and growing an empire from the ground up. I expect this story to get 5k by the end of the month.
I woke up in a room that stank of sex. I was at the bottom of a pile, draped in gently sleeping girls.
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...
Hot Dam!
I think this is actually pretty realistic in a way, and I wonder why so few Authors consider this. We as humans have our entire childhoods to come to grips with our built in instincts and when we reach puberty, several factors help us to keep things in check until we get the adult aspects of our instincts under control. BUT, if you are an adult and you wake up in a completely foreign body, you have ZERO time to acclimate and get used to your instincts. Add to that a adult bulls worth of foreign testosterone and you have a situation that will be very difficult to get a handle on.
Think about it, the only reason why people don't just screw everything that moves when we enter puberty is the physical awkwardness, the social inexperience and the lack of societal power that we have at those young ages.
I can't think of a better place for Starhearts quote than here.
Monk “Puberty was a curse for those inflicted with it, and boundless amusement for others who survived the process.” -Scarheart
Yeeah, all kidding aside, the only reason why that is such a massive issue here is the old adage: "We write what we know" and the undeniable fact that normal people really don't come to this fandom. As bad as it sounds, we really attract the outsiders and disenfranchised people and many of us have some really bizarre outlooks to sex and relationships. This is why we have so many touch phobic characters, sex phobic plot lines and other strange behaviors in our stories.
But having said that, I wouldn't trade the people here for any fortune in earthly wealth. The fandom has some of the best that humanity has to offer.
Monk "I-I'm sorry, did you just say 'blowjob'?" Jesse had to think seriously hard about this.” -An Intricate Disguise
11330896 Great, that's what I was going for. Glad it more or less transferred over. A sequence of events to push the narrative forwards & tie Parting Blade to the community. Just to be clear: >Part gets hormonal fighting Diamond Dogs, but doesn't know how to control any of it, or that it will trigger a pheromonal response in the minotaur girls >Part rubs Hoofstrong's head deep in his chest, walking back to the village, virtually sealing his fate >Hoofstrong confront's Part. Her induced arousal, in turn, induces arousal in him >The combination of passionate screams and the smell of sex is a dinnerbell to the rest of the villagers, who've collectively been on an involuntary years-long dry streak >The plot moves forward and OP doesn't have to write in extended romance baiting (profit?)
11330810 Compared to a lot of cover at that gets a pass, it should be fine. Plus, it's not upfront, but it's buried several chapters in and there's plenty of warning.
Things sure went hot there, thanks to our good’old friends, the hormones. Which also seemed to reveal what kind of bull he is for the night at least. Maybe getting some more info in next chapt about the societal stuff about minotaur intimacy?...
Quick question, is this an "evil Equestria" story? Because seeing "HiE in a non-Equestrian society" combined with the sex tag has in my experience been a mixed bag regarding that, what with a lot of authors making Equestria evil to drive a conflict without making their OCs the baddies.
11331607 There is a mention of war against the "Solar Empire", which would typically indicate such. But that still seems too easy for it to necessarily be the case.
In any case, there's only been a mention of the war, and it's evident that it is not nearby, so it's not clear if it will feature in any capacity beyond background. Or, for that matter, if there even actually is a war.
11331638 Hmm, slotting this one in the read later until that thread develops a bit more then. I hate those moments where I'm invested in a good story, only for it to go "suddenly, Tyrantlestia!"
Well when you put a `prized breeding bull` in a pin with a lot of female bovines...this tends to happen.
Some might have a beef with this sort of stuff, but I certainly don't. Long as it isn't something done overly often anyway, and if it suppose to happen a lot it easy to just imply and move on so I'm not overly worried.
11332875 None, I’m only a guy the plans and point’s out things needed to be done. Think of me as a master of warfare, strategy, and a bit of basic politics. You know, farming methods, mining, building certain buildings, military guidance in offensive and defensive situations, and a guy that helps overthrowing Celestia or helping her. {Depending on the author’s POV and what story they’re creating}
It's really a super super novel book I don't really know what we call this fanfiction all that to say that it was great even if there are only 4 or 5 chapters it was still fascinating on all the fight scenes it's well done kind really very well written I would like to know when your chapter will be released because well I can't wait to read the rest I really recommend reading this fanfic
“I was wrong about you,” she began, speaking over the quiet crunch of gravel as we continued our march through the town. “I’ve never seen anyone fight like that before, but you have the heart and soul of a warrior.”
"A heart and soul owed to my previous life, one I can remember clearly, as if it was yesterday. An ancient ferocity scarcely used, brought to the fore once more" A little bit of 'almost poetry' that my brain whipped up just now
I've learned from Wendigo. Suggestive images, not directly NSFW ones. Also, just a note about Malvi, Jersey, Blue, and Lulu. I noticed some people getting confused by the names. Those are all related to cow breeds that, in some way or another, correlate with the characters in question. And, shoutouts to everyone who predicted a sex-scene coming up in this chapter + apologies to everyone who didn't. I usually take a "bit" longer for my romance plots, but kind of wanted one here for narrative purposes and to avoid all that overplayed HiE sex drama. This is an adventure story.
Anyways, thanks for reading.
He’s going to double the population of the village all by himself; a one-bull baby boom!
Not sure how particular the mods are but that second image may be pushing it
not bad, more
I was not anticipating such a lustful~ chapter, I actually thought this was the beginning of him being the ruler and growing an empire from the ground up. I expect this story to get 5k by the end of the month.
...
...
Hot Dam!
I think this is actually pretty realistic in a way, and I wonder why so few Authors consider this. We as humans have our entire childhoods to come to grips with our built in instincts and when we reach puberty, several factors help us to keep things in check until we get the adult aspects of our instincts under control. BUT, if you are an adult and you wake up in a completely foreign body, you have ZERO time to acclimate and get used to your instincts. Add to that a adult bulls worth of foreign testosterone and you have a situation that will be very difficult to get a handle on.
Think about it, the only reason why people don't just screw everything that moves when we enter puberty is the physical awkwardness, the social inexperience and the lack of societal power that we have at those young ages.
I can't think of a better place for Starhearts quote than here.
Monk
“Puberty was a curse for those inflicted with it, and boundless amusement for others who survived the process.” -Scarheart
Yeeah, all kidding aside, the only reason why that is such a massive issue here is the old adage: "We write what we know" and the undeniable fact that normal people really don't come to this fandom. As bad as it sounds, we really attract the outsiders and disenfranchised people and many of us have some really bizarre outlooks to sex and relationships. This is why we have so many touch phobic characters, sex phobic plot lines and other strange behaviors in our stories.
But having said that, I wouldn't trade the people here for any fortune in earthly wealth. The fandom has some of the best that humanity has to offer.
Monk
"I-I'm sorry, did you just say 'blowjob'?" Jesse had to think seriously hard about this.” -An Intricate Disguise
Well... that escalated quickly.
11330896
Great, that's what I was going for. Glad it more or less transferred over. A sequence of events to push the narrative forwards & tie Parting Blade to the community.
Just to be clear:
>Part gets hormonal fighting Diamond Dogs, but doesn't know how to control any of it, or that it will trigger a pheromonal response in the minotaur girls
>Part rubs Hoofstrong's head deep in his chest, walking back to the village, virtually sealing his fate
>Hoofstrong confront's Part. Her induced arousal, in turn, induces arousal in him
>The combination of passionate screams and the smell of sex is a dinnerbell to the rest of the villagers, who've collectively been on an involuntary years-long dry streak
>The plot moves forward and OP doesn't have to write in extended romance baiting (profit?)
11329539
M-monk, the scary nasty sex got me. What do I do?!
All I got to say is that was hot
And I'm glad he's smarter than most MCs
11330896
You are a wise Monk.
11330810
Compared to a lot of cover at that gets a pass, it should be fine. Plus, it's not upfront, but it's buried several chapters in and there's plenty of warning.
I don't think anyone is going to care.
Things sure went hot there, thanks to our good’old friends, the hormones. Which also seemed to reveal what kind of bull he is for the night at least.
Maybe getting some more info in next chapt about the societal stuff about minotaur intimacy?...
After so many cute minotaur pictures in the story, sex was inevitable.
11331171
You mean like the females challenging each other for rights to the male by throwing coconuts at each other until there is only one left standing?
Monk
"Yes, I will eat the Fear Turkey." -Illua
Wow
ah yes the obligatory 'and then sex happens' chapter
Well that escalated quickly
From the weakness of the mind, Omnissiah save us!
Are minoutaurs a herd tribe?
Quick question, is this an "evil Equestria" story? Because seeing "HiE in a non-Equestrian society" combined with the sex tag has in my experience been a mixed bag regarding that, what with a lot of authors making Equestria evil to drive a conflict without making their OCs the baddies.
Yo I hope Lulu doesn't get left out!
11331607
There is a mention of war against the "Solar Empire", which would typically indicate such. But that still seems too easy for it to necessarily be the case.
In any case, there's only been a mention of the war, and it's evident that it is not nearby, so it's not clear if it will feature in any capacity beyond background. Or, for that matter, if there even actually is a war.
11331638
Hmm, slotting this one in the read later until that thread develops a bit more then. I hate those moments where I'm invested in a good story, only for it to go "suddenly, Tyrantlestia!"
Okay. Not that that’s done. Let’s get back to finding out ways to protect the village. The Diamond Dogs will be back, and in greater numbers.
11332138
maybe even with a piano! god help us all if they come back with a piano!
Well when you put a `prized breeding bull` in a pin with a lot of female bovines...this tends to happen.
Some might have a beef with this sort of stuff, but I certainly don't. Long as it isn't something done overly often anyway, and if it suppose to happen a lot it easy to just imply and move on so I'm not overly worried.
11332182
... heh.
"Beef."
I have to wonder though, which ones will be there for him afterwards, and how many will treat it as a one-off?
11332138
Are you the quest giver? How much experience points do I get for this?
11332875
None, I’m only a guy the plans and point’s out things needed to be done. Think of me as a master of warfare, strategy, and a bit of basic politics. You know, farming methods, mining, building certain buildings, military guidance in offensive and defensive situations, and a guy that helps overthrowing Celestia or helping her. {Depending on the author’s POV and what story they’re creating}
11332875
42,069 mans just had an orgy, he gets all the experience he needs
I wonder if Parting Blade is going to pull a Gengis Kahn where a majority future minotaurs can trace their lineage back to him.
It's really a super super novel book I don't really know what we call this fanfiction all that to say that it was great even if there are only 4 or 5 chapters it was still fascinating on all the fight scenes it's well done kind really very well written I would like to know when your chapter will be released because well I can't wait to read the rest I really recommend reading this fanfic
Ah and also to find out if he will have access to some type of magic like berserker or something like that or maybe the elemental control of the earth
"A heart and soul owed to my previous life, one I can remember clearly, as if it was yesterday. An ancient ferocity scarcely used, brought to the fore once more"
A little bit of 'almost poetry' that my brain whipped up just now
Disappointed he didn't have Lulu be the third minotaur to walk through that door. Full Size_Difference play.
11331204
You would say that, monk, you would say that.
Aw what about lulu?
11330878
Okay, so 5k's not going to happen yet, but we're reaching 2.5k. This story really blew up. We eagerly await the next chapter!
Suddenly; clop. I was not expecting that. Caught me completely off-guard.
Not expecting this ngl