I'm gonna wait to read this, wanna see it beef up a little.... But I already love the summary, so much potential and you don't see a lot of taur fics. Once this fic bulks up imma read the shit outta it! 👍
Now that he's learned the basics of movement and had a simple introduction to the world, this was a good time for a simple miniboss encounter to teach fighting mechanics and really get the lore started
I have been a lurker of MLP for many years but never had my own account until just recently, and I can say that I have yet to see a story that had starred the Minotaurs (Yaks and buffalo/bison yes but hardly any about minotaurs as the main characters) until now that is.
I didn’t want to lie to anyone or deceive by omission. But I had no clue how “I’m not actually a minotaur or sure how I got to this planet, can you help build me a spaceship?” would go down with my current cohort.
Thats what I like about you. You have intelligent characters. Only an idiot open his mouth and rambles about aliens, multiverses, other worlds and even worse, if they know of MLP, telling everyone about the future. I always thought that doing so was the dumbest thing a character could do in that situation.
Im looking forward to seeing where you're going to take this.
Monk “Not telling you too much about humanity's special power, but I can give you a big hint! It is pure, concentrated spite.” -Knight Breeze
1. Drop severed head 2. Check Town for Damage. 3. Get food, wine and laid. 4. Grab a dog and beat him for location of slaves. 5. ? 6. Profit
Im sorry, I don't care who you are, after a fight for your life, in a true life of death struggle, you get laid.
"But, but Monk, he can't do that. He has to whine for the next three chapters about his family first, then he can start wringing his hands about beastiality, but then he cant bring himself to do it because he is sexphobic and cant stand to even be touched! Monk your crazy! No one just has sex!"
Monk walks over with a look of true sorrow. "Shush....... Shush. It will be ok. The nasty sex wont get you."
The Monk “There are many ways to create a monster, and the one the girl knows best is rather basic: you tell someone they're a monster over and over again, then wait to see how long it takes before they agree with you.” -Estee
I can say that I have yet to see a story that had starred the Minotaurs
Its rare. Sadly I think its because there is so little in canon about them and the other races have a much richer backgrounds to work with. With Minotaurs, you kind of have to "Build as you go." Thats what happened with the changelings early on, but people had other Authors works to build on. Not so much with Taurs.
Although I do hope the Author uses Minos, Monoa, Minotauria / Monotaura, rather than Minotaur lands or Minotaur isles. I always felt that Minotaur Lands and Minotaur isles was just being lazy.
Monk "Thirty minutes, Celestia. I was gone for thirty minutes," he said to her in an annoyed tone. "And in that time, Canterlot has been overrun with insect-like creatures, the groom is hypnotized and unable to perform his job, and you are being flung across your own throne room by...whatever that is. In thirty minutes." -Onomonopia
That's some beautiful battle writing.
hard first battle now you must rest and prepare for another
All I got to say is bow down to the king
This a great read even though I usually prefer anthro stories but this is still a great read regardless.
Nice.
An excellent fight there. Really brought up in my mind the old saying of ”Mess with a bull, you get the horns”...
Keep it up.
Out of all the chapters so far, this is the best, mostly cause of the battling
Excellent battle writing, but I have to say I really loved the illustrations in this one! They add alot to your prose.
Well dam. That was a dope fight.
This is good battle writing, it's rare to see somethin' this good, I knew I found a gem the first time I laid eyes on it.
I cannot wait for more!
Mind of a man in the body of a bull, this is gonna be good
Surrounded? The poor sons of bitches. I can't think of a worse position for them to hold!
Me like very much is good good
im not trapped in this village with you
your trapped in this village with me
I'm gonna wait to read this, wanna see it beef up a little.... But I already love the summary, so much potential and you don't see a lot of taur fics. Once this fic bulks up imma read the shit outta it! 👍
Keep up the good word and I can't wait for the next chapter
Now that he's learned the basics of movement and had a simple introduction to the world, this was a good time for a simple miniboss encounter to teach fighting mechanics and really get the lore started
Now that was a thrilling chapter! Love this so far!
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That is all.
Hmm, our MC's purpose may have been discovered.
I do wonder how the other villagers will react to this newcomer, now coated in blood.
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Uhhh, do I get a bag of candy if I answer because I'll totally answer your question then
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Okay new head Cannon this is the theme song of the story now
Never seen a minotaur protag before, props for doing something different! I'm already invested in it, and eagerly wait for the next chapter!
I have been a lurker of MLP for many years but never had my own account until just recently, and I can say that I have yet to see a story that had starred the Minotaurs (Yaks and buffalo/bison yes but hardly any about minotaurs as the main characters) until now that is.
Excited 4 more. Wanna borrow an OC?
Thats what I like about you. You have intelligent characters. Only an idiot open his mouth and rambles about aliens, multiverses, other worlds and even worse, if they know of MLP, telling everyone about the future. I always thought that doing so was the dumbest thing a character could do in that situation.
Im looking forward to seeing where you're going to take this.
Monk
“Not telling you too much about humanity's special power, but I can give you a big hint! It is pure, concentrated spite.” -Knight Breeze
To Do List.
1. Drop severed head
2. Check Town for Damage.
3. Get food, wine and laid.
4. Grab a dog and beat him for location of slaves.
5. ?
6. Profit
Im sorry, I don't care who you are, after a fight for your life, in a true life of death struggle, you get laid.
"But, but Monk, he can't do that. He has to whine for the next three chapters about his family first, then he can start wringing his hands about beastiality, but then he cant bring himself to do it because he is sexphobic and cant stand to even be touched! Monk your crazy! No one just has sex!"
Monk walks over with a look of true sorrow. "Shush....... Shush. It will be ok. The nasty sex wont get you."
The Monk
“There are many ways to create a monster, and the one the girl knows best is rather basic: you tell someone they're a monster over and over again, then wait to see how long it takes before they agree with you.” -Estee
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Its rare. Sadly I think its because there is so little in canon about them and the other races have a much richer backgrounds to work with. With Minotaurs, you kind of have to "Build as you go." Thats what happened with the changelings early on, but people had other Authors works to build on. Not so much with Taurs.
Although I do hope the Author uses Minos, Monoa, Minotauria / Monotaura, rather than Minotaur lands or Minotaur isles. I always felt that Minotaur Lands and Minotaur isles was just being lazy.
Monk
"Thirty minutes, Celestia. I was gone for thirty minutes," he said to her in an annoyed tone. "And in that time, Canterlot has been overrun with insect-like creatures, the groom is hypnotized and unable to perform his job, and you are being flung across your own throne room by...whatever that is. In thirty minutes." -Onomonopia
That whole fight just had me thinking about doom Slayer saying RIP AND TEAR. Loved keep up the great work
Good chapter please do more
Wonderful story. I like that someone is doing more with the Minotaurs, whom I feel have been underutilized in the stories here so far.
WHO ELSE WANTS SOME!? This was badass!