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Why did you make this a mature story? The synopsis makes it sound more like an E rated story.

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1: pirate
2: a guy just got hit balls cut off
3: sex will happen eventually
4: like my other stories. I set a few back limits for the story and let it write itself

Awesome first chapter

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Thanks. Hope you enjoy the others

I'm actually shocked blue blood actually kept his word

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So was Luna. I guess BlueBlood wanted to stay on Luna's good side. Lol

You just keep getting better and better

I bet on a happy ending for the next chapter

another great chapter

why not spend time with all three

I wish I were him but the fun has just begun right

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He's in a rut and is surrounded by mares that just entered their heat. Yea, the 'fun' just begun. Oh no! What if Big Mac was in a rut too and finds him? RIP Swift's ass. Lol

Awesome work but I wonder what plans you have for mis rich

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Other than knocking her off her high chair just now? I can think of a few ways.

Awesome work and wonder what going on

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Guess you'll have to wait and find out

Great chapter I wonder what pinkie is up to

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Knowing her? Something random or crazy enough to work. Lol

Great chapter why not have rainbow dash fall for him and maybe a few others

I had a few ideas on his relationship with Dash. Rarity and Twilight will be complicated. And Fluttershy I have yet. To decide.
Note that all this is subject to change as the story progresses.

Great chapter and surprisingly good ending I wonder if shining armor had a twin sister

... not a bad question. And speaking of sisters. *evil grin* maybe I should bring one in. Or save that for the next book.

i like how rainbow loves swift now

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Like the story says. He's the only guy that gets her. Why wouldn't she fall for him?

Maybe a night of some fun that turns into a party of its own

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That does sound like an interesting idea. I was thinking of some... dark moments. But we can go with the fun too.

It shows how much Swift cares for the ones he likes and I don't want to piss him off and I love the chaos

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True. But mostly how much he hates slavers. Lol

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I 100% agree with Swift

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Yeah. Even pirates have things they don't allow.

Are there going to be any Pirates of the Caribbean references?

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Did you miss the songs? Or Swift's lines? If so, don't worry. They're will likely be more.

Oh I wonder what Spitfire plan is oh and this is bound to be fun

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I hope it will be. But we first will be capping off this little bit with Scootaloo.

Sea of Thieves inspired, right?

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Honestly? I was inspiredby the song for this chapter. The song extending over the town as a sine of his arrival wold be kinda creepy (if done right)

Sounds like things are getting fun I wonder if you have any plans for Knuckles to get set up with someone

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Don't worry. There's plenty of choices and time for him to get his rocks off. And don't forget about his sister. She'll get to have fun too.

You rock and can't wait to hear how knuckles spend two with pinkie

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You'll find out how his time with Pinkie went. Lol don't worry. And try using doc or word to help with wording. It helps a lot. You can probably tell when I started using mine with comparisons between my stories.

I like it and loved how knuckles sister came out at the end

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Thanks. ^^ I was debating on having her grand reveal the next morning. But I think Celestia's blunt reveal worked out better. Oh. And the bedroom scene isn't the big surprise.

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