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Wow. Just wow
UPDATE! Thank you sweet writer of glorious proportions.
Ahh, so sad ;-;
I love layered dream sequences like this every once in a while.
I like Cloud Fire.
Ahh, some juicy backstory via dreams.
Good god Dash, I don't think you're normally expected to destroy the course. And a Sonic Rainboom on command, nice. I think we pretty much have to assume based on the end of the season two finale that she can do them when and where she wants to, so I approve.
Huh, so she washed out the first time. I wonder if there's any chance we will see something similar when the Wonderbolts Academy episode airs.
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Me too. You should really see him in action with his twin wands, Hurt and Burn, however.
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Very interesting chapter. I liked how the format matched Rainbow's fragmented awareness as she kept slipping in and out of consciousness. I'm really liking this extended version of the story - the characters get so much more development, and each chapter really is a joy to read. Keep up the wonderful work
Those ghosts are really tearing her apart. Worst part is she doesn't want help.
Damn, more dream sequences please!
Wonderful work with the dream sequence; it was such a great choice to show Dash's backstory. The emotional content is really strong, as well.
Oh Dashy...
Yes I have nothing more to say but Wow very deap looking forward to the next update.
SO good.
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Well, canon Dash can never be a Wonderbolt. Her dream is truly impossible, because reaching it would necessitate that she spend most of her time away from her friends, and that goes completely against the message of the show.
Only in fanfiction can her dream be realized.
I've just read through this story, and it is amazing - probably one of the best pieces of fanfiction that I have read.
Also, that final line has a hauntingly beautiful quality (appropriately enough). The double entendre shines through there; she is haunted by the dreams she has each night, and her shattered dream of being in the Wonderbolts. . . It's a very, very nice touch
I really need to stop finding awesome unfinished fics by you.
I seriously hope you're still writing this, because it's too good to leave.
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Yeah, this one's still an active project. Next chapter is about half done (it was preempted by In the Garden of Good and Evil).
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Pausing an awesome story to write another awesome story?
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I have to say, this fic really demonstrates the claim of your biography.
This amuses me more than it should.
I dunno, I wouldn't put it past Twilight to be unreasonably cold and rational in any situation that does not call for neurotic and panicking. Or neurotic and panicking in any situation at all. She can be weird like that if she wants.
Cyan's not really the right shade of blue. It's too greenish and light. One could maybe justify going as light as azure, for the sake of variety, but really they're more like sapphire or cobalt.
That seems a bit excessive . . . surely there's a point in the process where the potential recruits are allowed to show off their skill in whatever manner they choose? That would be a fine place to demonstrate that you've still got that Rainboom speed. And it seems kind of rude to pull a maneuver that's supposed to be physically impossible for extra speed when you could have easily been the fastest without it.
Nice job jinxing it.
Perhaps not just like all the other washouts . . . you did save his life and his pie, and one of those he was conscious for.
Also, even if you're surely not the only washout who could be described as "lithe," how many others have such a striking mane as you? All you really need to be the hottest mare on the cloud is to be the first to draw the stallions' eyes, and the ability to hold some of that attention, and you've got the first part down automatically.
Have I mentioned that this chapter is definitely a turning point? I don't think I have, yet. But it clearly is.
Dash's mind is clearly running on at least two levels that haven't the slightest clue about each other.
Isn't that what psychotherapy's about? Talking about things that mean nothing until you realize that things that mean nothing are the purest window to your true thoughts? And then you can be cured?
Of course, much of what I just said is total bullshit, either on my part or psychotherapy's, but the point stands that anything that recurs often cannot be purely random happenstance, and thus must carry some information.
1779308 To join the Wonderbolts would require her to spend a significant amount of time away from Ponyville, yes. But she could still maintain strong relationships with her friends there, if she tried. It would just mean she would need to put more effort into those friendships than she currently is, to compensate for often being away at shows. And you know her friends would be supportive, even if they worried about losing her. Things would change, yes, quite irrevocably, but such is the nature of life. This is not a change that would have to be for the worse.
Tell me there's no moral appropriate for the show in there. I dare you.
3:37 in the morning. Got school in a few hours. Can't help myself. Must keep reading.
3189539 It's 6am for me, I began reading this story at 1am, and I still can't stop. At least I'm on holiday and don't have to worry about school :P
This chapter. I like this chapter. This is a good chapter and I like it.
Ghosts can still haunt the living. It's why they're called ghosts. Poor RD.
I'm writing this after having been rejected from the last of the universities I applied to for graduate school. It really hurts. I guess this was a good thing, since it sparked some soul-searching for indentity, but being set back a year, well... that's one steep price to pay, right? This coming from someone who zipped through everything with no setbacks whatsoever. This was unfathomable. It felt like my hard work was slipping from my hands. And why even bother at that point?
The passage quoted above is beautiful, and it gave me hope. I have my whole life to make it... and a few months later, I know I'l be the first in line. Thanks a lot for this. You're an amazing author and an awesome person.
Dream chapters are best chapters.
You have such a way with words. One that makes me pause in my reading to marvel at the images you've evoked, and the emotions you've woven into their tapestries. One that compels addition after inclusion to my commonplace. I see this story has been finished for years, but for those like me, reading it for the first time, it may as well have been completed yesterday. Therefore, I hope this will not fall on deaf ears: bravo!
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Thanks man, and thanks for taking the time to say so :)